You Came To Me An Angel Dressed In Light

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unthymed tercets

The moon with a full smile beams cradled inside the golden ring around stars twinkle entering one vision Cut from the clearest crystals baptised through the oceans mist held on the throne crowning beauty

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/23/2018 11:10:00 AM

Hi Liam, guess who? Another awesome write from your golden pen my friend. Your words are the gentlest dream, painting such a wonderful canvas within the mind. As always, your words bring peace to this reader. Such beautiful imagery my friend. May your pen ever run gold. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/20/2018 2:22:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! This is a most excellent Tercet theme. The metaphor you've developed and employed here is further complemented by the outstanding imagery that makes this both a compelling and captivating write. Superbly Done!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2018 10:52:00 AM

- So tenderly and beautifully, Liam :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2018 6:34:00 PM

absolutely gorgeous imagery Liam - we went out for a moonlight walk earlier, the moon looks radiant beaming down on the inky sea:-) hugs jan xx

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/18/2018 6:30:00 PM

So uniquely lovely. Until two weeks ago I walked my little dog at night before I lost her, and enjoyed the moon and its changes and how it defined the clouds driving.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/18/2018 5:58:00 PM

Excellent imagery, painted with creative brushstrokes..well done, liam.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/18/2018 5:40:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^