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You Broke My Heart Ep

Today is Valentines Day, the day lovers enjoy to share, They stare into each others eyes and run fingers through each others hair. But sadly I do not share in their excitement they feel, Because you broke my heart and the pain is so real. We used to spend all of our days and nights together, I remember the picnics we would have on the beach in the beautiful weather. All that changed the day you said you stopped loving me, And you said that you felt smothered and wanted to be free. I pray every night in bed that you will love me again, And I put my feelings in words when I write with my pen. I know it won't happen and you will never return to my live, You broke my heart so bad and I thought I was going to be your wife. Nothing that happens on this day will put a smile on my face, You broke my heart into pieces and it's such a disgrace. Debra Baviello February 20, 2015

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Date: 6/2/2016 3:03:00 PM
Great couplets on such a sad subject, very well written. Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:53:00 AM
This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:19:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Debra Baviello
Date: 5/28/2015 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 5/27/2015 10:10:00 AM
Debra, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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Debra Baviello
Date: 5/28/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much...I enjoyed sharing my poem with everyone.
Date: 2/26/2015 9:32:00 AM
Sad very sad but poetically beautiful...Love Debra
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Debra Baviello
Date: 5/28/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for the sweet words. :)
Date: 2/20/2015 7:31:00 AM
Oh....this is written beautifully though it carries so much heartache. Lovely poem...Hope it all works out in the end.
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Debra Baviello
Date: 2/20/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem and for the great comments. Enjoy your weekend. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs