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You Branded Me

I wish you had been more careful With those words that you flung out At me today I guess you didn’t realize That they were red hot Though spoken in “jest” And in a quiet voice They were red hot And they seared my heart Branding me with the word REJECTED ....Again. I thought branding was for cattle Ah....but humans are adept At branding others The smell of burning flesh The stench of pain The open wounds That harden with time Yet remain As a grotesque testament Of a heart that has been branded! I guess you didn’t realize That what you said Will go with me to the grave Because it scorched my heart My poor little heart that one day will tire of all the burns and will stop beating a scarred little mass Finally at rest From the red hot branding iron Of your tongue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2021 12:43:00 AM
I was literally moved by the power of your poem, I can relate with it. Expect to read more from you. Naye Joseph J
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Date: 5/17/2021 10:15:00 PM
You expressed this so well. Some pains are hard to erase. Hugs Rick
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Date: 5/17/2021 9:00:00 PM
I’ve felt this way too, only you said it much better than I could. Good job Eileen, and congrats on being featured.
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Date: 10/29/2014 3:10:00 PM
I know this feeling and you have expressed it well. I hope all the love you receive amply compensates for those moments of rejection. Hugs Rick
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