Constance La France Poet Limerick

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''You'' Ate My Sweets

When I was a kid on Halloween night,
I would plan my costume to give a fright;
You my young brother did not,
and complained they were too hot;
So, I got more Halloween fun delight !

My Halloween bag was full of sweet treats,
because I knocked on doors on all the streets;
You said better give me some,
and you better not tell mom;
(Hope YOU are sick from eating all MY sweets !)

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October 17, 2019 

Poetry/Non-IP Limerick/"You" Ate My Sweets
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1189-273-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, If I Were My Brother
sponsor, Bobby May

Second Place

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Cecilia Macfarlane November 2, 2019 at 10:20 AM Sweet limerick and fine win. Congrats. Hugs Constance La France November 2, 2019 at 3:49 PM Cecilia, thanks so much for the visit and the congrats !

Timothy Mcguire November 1, 2019 at 5:01 PM Love limericks and love this SWEET one! Constance La France November 2, 2019 at 3:50 PM Tim, thanks for the compliment and you are the limerick king too !

Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:09 AM Sweet Lim's Constance. Well done! Congratulations on your placement. Constance La France November 2, 2019 at 3:51 PM Charles thanks so much for the compliment and congrats!

Jan Allison October 30, 2019 at 6:13 PM what a great string of limericks Constance i do love your fun side, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Constance La France November 1, 2019 at 4:54 AM Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats !

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 9:55 AM - Congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France October 30, 2019 at 10:28 AM Anne-Lise thanks for the congrats !

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 8:56 AM Congratulations on your placement my poetry sis and for sure I would steal your candy! Constance La France October 30, 2019 at 10:27 AM Bobby, thanks so much for a great contest, it was fun and thanks for my placement, appreciate, (I wish I could only give you those rotten apples but mother said no)

Jack Horne October 23, 2019 at 7:44 AM Ha ha, love it - hope you're both well xx Constance La France October 24, 2019 at 10:58 AM Jack thanks for visiting my poem..oh yes we are both just waiting for Halloween, Snuggles has her costume ready !

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2019 at 2:14 PM Fun poem, Dear Heart. I especially loved how you ended it. A good curse for bad brother. Constance La France October 20, 2019 at 10:34 AM Andrea, thanks so much for the visit and comment, appreciate !

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2019 at 2:05 PM - A sweet sister who shares with her brother - Lovely written, D.H. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France October 17, 2019 at 2:16 PM Anne-Lise, I did share but not by choice !!