''You'' Ate My Sweets

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When I was a kid on Halloween night, I would plan my costume to give a fright; You my young brother did not, and complained they were too hot; So, I got more Halloween fun delight ! My Halloween bag was full of sweet treats, because I knocked on doors on all the streets; You said better give me some, and you better not tell mom; (Hope YOU are sick from eating all MY sweets !) ____________________________________ October 17, 2019 Poetry/Non-IP Limerick/"You" Ate My Sweets Copyright Protected, ID 19-1189-273-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, If I Were My Brother sponsor, Bobby May Second Place

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2019 10:20:00 AM

Sweet limerick and fine win. Congrats. Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2019 3:49:00 PM

Cecilia, thanks so much for the visit and the congrats !

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 11/1/2019 5:01:00 PM

Love limericks and love this SWEET one!

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2019 3:50:00 PM

Tim, thanks for the compliment and you are the limerick king too !

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:09:00 AM

Sweet Lim's Constance. Well done! Congratulations on your placement.

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2019 3:51:00 PM

Charles thanks so much for the compliment and congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2019 6:13:00 PM

what a great string of limericks Constance i do love your fun side, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/1/2019 4:54:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2019 9:55:00 AM

- Congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2019 10:28:00 AM

Anne-Lise thanks for the congrats !

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement my poetry sis and for sure I would steal your candy!

Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2019 10:27:00 AM

Bobby, thanks so much for a great contest, it was fun and thanks for my placement, appreciate, (I wish I could only give you those rotten apples but mother said no)