You Arrogant Puck

There was a tall brute who played hockey
Whose actions were deemed as quite cocky
His opponents saw red
So they stomped on his head
Now the twerp earns his keep as a jockey!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 7:33 PM
cool limerick. I love those things. Good luck, Kory
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:00 PM
hahaha, this has GOT to do well. It is excellent humor AND meter. Love it!
Goff Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 7:21 PM
fun, original limerick! Kory!!! jimbo
Walters Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Haha!! Really nicely done!! I enjoyed! hugs, kris
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Good luck in the contest with this humor on some attitudes of those that particiapate in sports..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..My biological mother died 65 years ago...I have no idea what she was like but I have the emotional bond still..Sara
Heckman Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 12:47 PM
This is so cute...Thanks again for your generous comments. Julie Heckman
Devonshire Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 11:55 AM
LOL Guess he shrank a few inches after being "pouned on his head." Very funny limerick, Dory. Best wishes for success in Royal's contest. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 11:25 AM
such a swell, smashin' write i could the feel the punch, kory.. hope this goes to the winners' list! thanks for coming around my page! love your style!! :) huggs, nette
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:36 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Kory. Thank you for commenting on my poetry. Love, Carol
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