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You Arrogant Puck

There was a tall brute who played hockey Whose actions were deemed as quite cocky His opponents saw red So they stomped on his head Now the twerp earns his keep as a jockey!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 2/5/2011 7:33:00 PM
cool limerick. I love those things. Good luck, Kory
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:00:00 PM
hahaha, this has GOT to do well. It is excellent humor AND meter. Love it!
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:21:00 PM
fun, original limerick! Kory!!! jimbo
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:27:00 PM
Haha!! Really nicely done!! I enjoyed! hugs, kris
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:02:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this humor on some attitudes of those that particiapate in sports..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..My biological mother died 65 years ago...I have no idea what she was like but I have the emotional bond still..Sara
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:47:00 PM
This is so cute...Thanks again for your generous comments. Julie Heckman
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:55:00 AM
LOL Guess he shrank a few inches after being "pouned on his head." Very funny limerick, Dory. Best wishes for success in Royal's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:25:00 AM
such a swell, smashin' write i could the feel the punch, kory.. hope this goes to the winners' list! thanks for coming around my page! love your style!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:36:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Kory. Thank you for commenting on my poetry. Love, Carol
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