You Are You

You tell me all the time
That you are fat and ugly. 
That you aren't good at anything. 
That you are the biggest jerk. 

You tell me that your hair looks bad,
That your jackets is too ragged. 
That your hat has been around too long. 
That your shirt looks too starchy.

Through my eyes, if you could see yourself,
None of the things you say would be true, 
Because to me: you are you 
And that's absolutely perfect!  

Through my eyes you'd see, 
That you are so strong and handsome. 
That when you try for something, you excel!
That you have a huge heart of love and kindness. 

You would see that your hair is perfect. 
Your jacket keeps you warm. 
Your hat does its job well. 
And your shirt is just your style. 

If only you could see yourself through my eyes!
You wouldn't see anything imperfect. 
Because I see you through a filter of love. 
You are you and that is perfect.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Another 7, this one shows great wisdom and a compassionate heart too. Bravooooo!!!
Taylor Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Omg, thank you so much! That is so kind of you to say! <3 Tash
Clemons Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Beautiful poem, Tasha. The encouragement of others is indeed an amazing perspective, expressed perfectly through your poetic piece. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like, Peace.
Taylor Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Haha, thank you so much! I will definitely go and look through them. :) <3 Tash
Poet Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 11:51 AM
That was outstanding. I love it.
Taylor Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Thank you very much!
Kiser Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Another's view is sometimes the best medicine for one's self-esteem. Well done.
Taylor Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 4:59 PM
I completely agree. The only problem with that is making it known and then making it seem true. Thank you a ton! <3 Tash
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 12:49 PM
- We all want to be perfect, especially when we are young - Hard to be young ..... much pressure .... advertising and fashion - and skinny models - A great poem Tasha, the last line is wise and I agree with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Taylor Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Anne-Lise, I love your comments! I wrote this poem for the guy I like because I had to express to him some how that He is amazing and perfect. Thanks you again for your comment! <3 Tash
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