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Daniel Henry Rodgers' April National Poetry Month Contest

You Are the One -- DHR

l. Opening the closet of narra doors, I sweep through organza skirts and gemmed ringlets; my hair ruffling aimlessly upon scalloped kerchiefs smelling decade - old hyacinth, Mom’s favorite ambrosia: she would lift her anklets in tiptoed hums, ”night and day, you are the one..” Evenings touched her candle hands; hands that soothed wounded knees from jackstone fights; her fingers caressing a pony -tailed girl’s wrath with piano keys rippling into a gentle moan; And i am delivered from my tempestuous rants. ll. From nowhere, the porcelain mirror gazed at me; her rhythm of silence billows, cradling my nights with each veil of her almond eyes that enter into my irises: a serene sight too close, much too tight I clung to her unspoken word. Through years, I grew like a bamboo shoot: her quiet smiles and music walked me through reality’s maze. And how I would wail bearing the grim of hard study, coughing late, late hours of reading toil…yet, she stayed like a moth with charm flushed in a wind of calm gaze, ebbing . lll. And only Mom could melt my temper when my raging soul paused to wonder at her light’s glow: oh, her feminine beat illumined more lamplights dancing inside this rebellious head… and now, she hovers around me. I become her eyes, chanting; never balking at my surreal conquests. She is gone bequeathing warmth into my torched flights without question; with much love dripping from her graceful movement, straying all through these my breaths: “night and day, you are the one…”
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Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 7:50 PM
Wonderful poem and worthy win. Congrats, my friend
Carmack Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 4:32 PM
A fitting placement for a fitting contest. Congrats.
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Nette, this is just beautiful--well-deserving of that top win! Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 3:34 AM
This is so sad and moving Nette. We can't go back in time, only through memory as you have done. This is so deserving of your top win! Congratulations!; ) 7
Neumann Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 3:32 AM
Congratulations. This is heartfelt, makes me feel it and a wonderful tribute to your mother. Many wishes, Kai
Bradfield Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Wonderful, touching poem..Congratulations..Larry
Y. Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Hi Nette, You have penned such a touching story. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:16 PM
As tender as a mothers love, congratulations Nette...
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August 29, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Touching Nette...so much emotions embedded in your write. Great work!Congrats on 1st place :) Sunita
Krampe Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 11:11 AM
What a wonderful, deeply moving tribute to your mother, Nette. Congrats on your win. Agnes
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Nette, this touched me deeply lady...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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December 29, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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December 28, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Nette, Congratulations in Judy Konos contest... wuv SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 7:03 PM
This has a magical quality, congratulations Nette.
George   Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 4:07 PM
AMAzING !!!! Dear Nette. I am simply blown away by this masterpiece of writing. Elaine
Y. Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Nette, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
A   Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Nette, Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Nette, wonderful win. SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Simply breathtaking poem Nette congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Yes, this is descriptive so much so, I feel I am there. Awesome write.
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:28 AM
This is absolutely stunning and brilliant! Congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 5:40 AM
Lovely and heartfelt poem on mommy. Congrats on the fine win, nette
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March 19, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Nette, A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Congrats Nette! When I first commented on this poem I had no doubt it would do well, and I've been proved right :) // paul
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