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You Are So Beautiful

You are so beautiful, my love for you is strong. My heart melts when you are gone. I tremble when you come around. My heart drops to the ground. My love for you is true. Being with you makes my world go round. You area are like diamonds that twinkle in the sky. You are so beautiful, my love for you is real. This is how you make me fee. Your face is full of bright. You blind me in the night. Your hair shines like a handful of good. You are so pretty and so bold. When you touch me my blood pressure erupts like a volcanoes ready to distruct. As hours pass and days fly by. We love on and on until we die. The world we live may go bad. Our love will sure stay glad. Our memories will never be forgotten as we love and love again. What we have we will ways mend. As we get old and grey the love we share will always stay, for you are so beautiful.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/13/2015 1:01:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Johnathan!

Skat A

Date: 10/12/2015 12:14:00 PM

Johnathan, Congratulations on your heartfelt win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:01:00 AM

Hi Johnathan, Congratulations on your wonderful HM. Stop by my latest PINKTOBER blog titles "YOU SAY," if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2015 9:13:00 PM

Johnathan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/27/2015 3:06:00 PM

Johnathan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 9:33:00 AM

- Hey Johnathan :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)