You Are So Beautiful

Soft notes of a clarinet playing
‘You are so beautiful’, stirs memories
of holding hands and making plans
in the dimly lit atmosphere, so close, 
the scent of your after shave 
left me breathless for a moment.

My long locks softly wrapped themselves
around the scarlet lei you bestowed around
my neck with a tender kiss to each cheek.
Lighting and music melded into magic.

When you cupped my face
in your masculine hands I could feel 
the current flowing between us in
unknown wattage that swept through my body
like bolts of lightning as my entire being
tingled in the nearness of your aura.

They say ‘warm hands, cold heart’, but
I found this to be intrinsically untrue.
I will never forget the passion exuding from 
your warm heart, with those warm hands!
Our first kiss spoke to me assuredly as
the material world vanished and 
we were alone, alone in the darkness, 
alone in our world.

© Connie Marcum Wong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bartley Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 2:31 PM
Nice love poem. Romantically erotic.
Austin Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:15 AM
"My entire being tingled in the nearness of your aura." Now this is extra-sensory. I had to go way down the list to find one I hadn't seen, but it was so, so worth it. Love, How about the characters - they start to spell Beethoven
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Thank you Daver. This is mostly true, about 95%. I appreciate your visit and I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you very much for your nice comment. ; )
A  Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Connie, Congrats.. SKAT
Torres Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Connie, I'd like to thank you for sharing us your love story.. I'm so inspired!!! A big congratulations for your win!!! :O))
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Thank you very much Aiyah. I am thrilled to be on your winner's list. A great contest. Cheers, Connie
Y. Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Connie, this is so romantic.Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Thank you Alexis. Most of it is true. We are still together after almost 34 years. Cheers, Connie
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Hi Connie, I remember your lovely poem. So happy to read and enjoy it again. Again, you captured the romance and the true meaning of love. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 10:06 PM
It is mostly true Sandra. Thanks a lot! Hugs, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 6:06 PM
finally reading your reply to my comment on this one. So did he ever write a valentine like you asked? Thanks for visiting me here today. You are one of my best friends ever.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:08 PM
He gave me roses instead, but he did write something real nice in the card. Thanks Andrea. You are a best friend to me too. I really appreciate how you always comment on my poems. Hugs, Connie
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 10:54 AM
Beautifully romantic and spiced with passion, Connie! I like! Songs get my memory wheels turning, too. I match most dates and important things in life with songs; they never let me down! Will be back to you re em:) // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:11 PM
Thank you very much Paul. I have been busier than usual lately so forgive the delay. Cheers, Connie
Sietesantos Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Connie, this is such a very beautiful Valentine's Day piece - so romantic! It's wonderful to be in love! Wishing you love always. Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:13 PM
Thank you very much Pandita for your lovely comment. It is much appreciated. Hugs, Connie XXXOOO
Poet Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Love this Connie!Lovely poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 8:42 AM
I am mesmorized by this passionate piece. Exceptional!7
Sirak Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Wow! Subtly sensual and so very romantic. Your pen soared to new heights with this one.
Ryerson Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Well Connie, I hope you're satisfied because NOW I gotta go take a blood pressure pill followed by a cold shower...You NEVER cease to amaze with your unique, signature style and as is your usual, this is written with class, grace and elegance...
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Thank you so much Tim. You leave the nicest comments and I very much appreciate it. Hugs, Connie
Cooper Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 3:30 AM
It is a wonderful poem to share with your hubby on that special day. I remember the night my wife and I also met but I do not have the beauty of your words to set it to verse. Definite 7 Love Shane xxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 5:28 AM
Why thank you very much Shane for such a lovely comment. I have challenged him to write me something romantic back. He is still pondering it. LoL. Hugs, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 6:55 PM
my goodness. this is a GEM, Connie. I just love this one. SEVEN for sure!!!! Did you show it to your lucky guy??
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 1:12 AM
Yes I did Andrea. I spiced his up a bit more than I wanted to share with everyone here. LOL. And I challenged him to write me a Valentine poem. We shall see! Glad you like this Andrea. Thanks, Connie
Lariviere Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 4:47 PM
very beautiful!!!!!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Thank you very much Etienne. It is a pleasure to meet you. Cheers, Connie
Haight Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Connie, this is such a beautiful Valentine's Day tribute to the one you love. You have captured much romance and true meaning of love. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 1:40 AM
Thank you much Sandra for your kind comments. It is a true story of when I met my husband. Hugs, Connie
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Yes, this is so beautiful! I can hear the song playing...Valentine 's Day is bringing out the romantic side of everyone and some lovely poetry...if you can find someone with a warm heart and warm hands, you are blessed...hugs, Rhonda
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 1:41 AM
I am very blessed Rhonda. He also rubs my back! Thanks so much for your sweet comments. Hugs, Connie
Martin Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Connie, if this poem doesn't capture the essence of true love then NOTHING does! An extremely touching & moving piece of poetry and thanks again for visiting earlier. I'll be back later for more of your wonderful thoughts...Terry
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 6:21 AM
- A beautiful Valentine poem, Connie - So warm words of love!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Being alone with the person one loves is heaven on earth, dear Connie, this it is obvious you know very well for your enchanting verse captures the moment of love's culmination into ecstasy!
Otong Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 12:55 AM
A valentines gift Connie, Love, Amor
Meade Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Here's to warm hands, warms hearts and wet kisses . . . outstanding dear Connie. Your passions still burns brightly through all the years -- the best yet to come!! 7
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Thank you very much David. I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day!
Bauer Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 8:44 PM
wow! this is beautiful and romantic and very touching, connie! a perfect poem for valentine's day...
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 9:51 PM
Thank you very much Ilene. I appreciate your comment. Happy Valentine's Day!
Lindley Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 8:31 PM
A wonderful romantic poem my friend. Even better after reading its based on your times with your husband. I hope you show this gem to him, let him know this... I show my wife everything I write. She loves it.. A7 and a truly great read tonight!!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 9:50 PM
Thank you very much Robert. I appreciate your lovely comment. How lucky you are that your wife appreciates your poetry. Hugs, Connie
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