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You Are So Beautiful

Soft notes of a clarinet playing ‘You are so beautiful’, stirs memories of holding hands and making plans in the dimly lit atmosphere, so close, the scent of your after shave left me breathless for a moment. My long locks softly wrapped themselves around the scarlet lei you bestowed around my neck with a tender kiss to each cheek. Lighting and music melded into magic. When you cupped my face in your masculine hands I could feel the current flowing between us in unknown wattage that swept through my body like bolts of lightning as my entire being tingled in the nearness of your aura. They say ‘warm hands, cold heart’, but I found this to be intrinsically untrue. I will never forget the passion exuding from your warm heart, with those warm hands! Our first kiss spoke to me assuredly as the material world vanished and we were alone, alone in the darkness, alone in our world. © Connie Marcum Wong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 11:15:00 AM
"My entire being tingled in the nearness of your aura." Now this is extra-sensory. I had to go way down the list to find one I hadn't seen, but it was so, so worth it. Love, How about the characters - they start to spell Beethoven
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/6/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Daver. This is mostly true, about 95%. I appreciate your visit and I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you very much for your nice comment. ; )
Date: 10/25/2015 3:32:00 PM
Connie, Congrats.. SKAT
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Date: 10/21/2015 6:33:00 PM
Connie, I'd like to thank you for sharing us your love story.. I'm so inspired!!! A big congratulations for your win!!! :O))
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/21/2015 10:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Aiyah. I am thrilled to be on your winner's list. A great contest. Cheers, Connie
Date: 10/21/2015 4:20:00 PM
Connie, this is so romantic.Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/21/2015 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Alexis. Most of it is true. We are still together after almost 34 years. Cheers, Connie
Date: 10/20/2015 9:40:00 PM
Hi Connie, I remember your lovely poem. So happy to read and enjoy it again. Again, you captured the romance and the true meaning of love. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/21/2015 10:06:00 PM
It is mostly true Sandra. Thanks a lot! Hugs, Connie
Date: 3/11/2015 6:06:00 PM
finally reading your reply to my comment on this one. So did he ever write a valentine like you asked? Thanks for visiting me here today. You are one of my best friends ever.
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Date: 3/12/2015 2:08:00 PM
He gave me roses instead, but he did write something real nice in the card. Thanks Andrea. You are a best friend to me too. I really appreciate how you always comment on my poems. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/16/2015 10:54:00 AM
Beautifully romantic and spiced with passion, Connie! I like! Songs get my memory wheels turning, too. I match most dates and important things in life with songs; they never let me down! Will be back to you re em:) // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/12/2015 2:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul. I have been busier than usual lately so forgive the delay. Cheers, Connie
Date: 2/15/2015 9:58:00 AM
Connie, this is such a very beautiful Valentine's Day piece - so romantic! It's wonderful to be in love! Wishing you love always. Pandita
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Date: 3/12/2015 2:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Pandita for your lovely comment. It is much appreciated. Hugs, Connie XXXOOO
Date: 2/10/2015 9:38:00 PM
Love this Connie!Lovely poem.
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Date: 2/10/2015 8:42:00 AM
I am mesmorized by this passionate piece. Exceptional!7
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Date: 2/10/2015 8:00:00 AM
Wow! Subtly sensual and so very romantic. Your pen soared to new heights with this one.
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Date: 2/10/2015 7:12:00 AM
Well Connie, I hope you're satisfied because NOW I gotta go take a blood pressure pill followed by a cold shower...You NEVER cease to amaze with your unique, signature style and as is your usual, this is written with class, grace and elegance...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/12/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Tim. You leave the nicest comments and I very much appreciate it. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/10/2015 3:30:00 AM
It is a wonderful poem to share with your hubby on that special day. I remember the night my wife and I also met but I do not have the beauty of your words to set it to verse. Definite 7 Love Shane xxx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2015 5:28:00 AM
Why thank you very much Shane for such a lovely comment. I have challenged him to write me something romantic back. He is still pondering it. LoL. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/9/2015 6:55:00 PM
my goodness. this is a GEM, Connie. I just love this one. SEVEN for sure!!!! Did you show it to your lucky guy??
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Date: 2/10/2015 1:12:00 AM
Yes I did Andrea. I spiced his up a bit more than I wanted to share with everyone here. LOL. And I challenged him to write me a Valentine poem. We shall see! Glad you like this Andrea. Thanks, Connie
Date: 2/9/2015 4:47:00 PM
very beautiful!!!!!!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2015 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much Etienne. It is a pleasure to meet you. Cheers, Connie
Date: 2/9/2015 3:29:00 PM
Connie, this is such a beautiful Valentine's Day tribute to the one you love. You have captured much romance and true meaning of love. Hugs, Sandra
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2015 1:40:00 AM
Thank you much Sandra for your kind comments. It is a true story of when I met my husband. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/9/2015 10:07:00 AM
Yes, this is so beautiful! I can hear the song playing...Valentine 's Day is bringing out the romantic side of everyone and some lovely poetry...if you can find someone with a warm heart and warm hands, you are blessed...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/10/2015 1:41:00 AM
I am very blessed Rhonda. He also rubs my back! Thanks so much for your sweet comments. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/9/2015 7:59:00 AM
Connie, if this poem doesn't capture the essence of true love then NOTHING does! An extremely touching & moving piece of poetry and thanks again for visiting earlier. I'll be back later for more of your wonderful thoughts...Terry
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Date: 2/9/2015 6:21:00 AM
- A beautiful Valentine poem, Connie - So warm words of love!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2015 5:56:00 AM
Being alone with the person one loves is heaven on earth, dear Connie, this it is obvious you know very well for your enchanting verse captures the moment of love's culmination into ecstasy!
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Date: 2/9/2015 12:55:00 AM
A valentines gift Connie, Love, Amor
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:47:00 PM
Here's to warm hands, warms hearts and wet kisses . . . outstanding dear Connie. Your passions still burns brightly through all the years -- the best yet to come!! 7
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 9:55:00 PM
Thank you very much David. I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day!
Date: 2/8/2015 8:44:00 PM
wow! this is beautiful and romantic and very touching, connie! a perfect poem for valentine's day...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 9:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Ilene. I appreciate your comment. Happy Valentine's Day!
Date: 2/8/2015 8:31:00 PM
A wonderful romantic poem my friend. Even better after reading its based on your times with your husband. I hope you show this gem to him, let him know this... I show my wife everything I write. She loves it.. A7 and a truly great read tonight!!!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 9:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Robert. I appreciate your lovely comment. How lucky you are that your wife appreciates your poetry. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/8/2015 6:55:00 PM
Wow, this just makes this poem even more magical!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 6:58:00 PM
Smile. Thank you. We ladies never forget romantic moments that are meaningful to us.
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