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You Are Richer Than You Know

Next time you venture out and it's pouring down with rain
Spare a thought for the less fortunate before you complain
Be grateful that you can see and feel its natural beauty
Those who are sight impaired will never see what you see.

Listening to loud claps of thunder that boom in the sky
Hearing sweet music or your newborn's first cry
Those with hearing impairment will never hear those sounds
Or the soothing sounds of nature that everywhere abounds.

We take for granted a walk in the woods or a stroll on a beach
But for the less able these things are way out of their reach
Or cycling along a country lane that many of us can do
Disability for many means they're not mobile like you.
 
Life often throws up problems and things don't go our way
But there are many others who face huge problems every day
Many overcome their disabilities and are a great inspiration
So, look on the bright side when faced with a difficult situation

So, if you can offer help to someone do so if you can
Make someone's day be it a child, woman, or man.  
It has often been said that your well-being is your wealth
You are richer than you know if you've got excellent health.
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Kingston Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:33 PM
This is a good poem for my grateful journal Tom. It certainly is a poem that deserved it's win. As I write tonight, it is the third week of Lent, so poem rings especially true. Your last stanza is my favorite.
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 12:29 AM
Thank you very much Marikate, I'm happy you enjoyed it. It's only as you get older and wiser that you realise how much you have, many are a lot worse off than you. Tom
Ashley Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Dear Tom, your exceptional poem reminds us to be grateful for our health and to be thoughtful and helpful to those in need. The beauty of wisdom and empathy shines in your golden verse. Congratulations for your success in Ink’s contest. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a happy new year filled with light, love, laughter, and of course, poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
Cunningham Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Thank you very much Susan, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. It's not until we get older that we realise how lucky we are and have really nothing to complain about, others less fortunate never complain and just get on with life doing the best that they can. Wishing you too a very happy and healthy 2025. Tom
Agustin Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, so wisdom-filled; delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.
Cunningham Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you very much Beata, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you had a lovely Christmas and hope you have a very happy new year. Tom
Empress Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 7:13 AM
This is such a powerful and much needed poem in a world so cold and dark and dreary, I especially love “We take for granted a walk in the woods or a stroll on a beach” so true! Let us remind ourselves all this everyday. Iv also said everything i feel about this in comments, before. Congratulations on your win: thank you for sharing. Hope holidays treat you well. Sending you light
Cunningham Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thank you very much IE, I'm happy you enjoyed it a second time around. Now that I'm older and see others less fortunate I realise that I've a lot to be grateful for. I take nothing for granted. Thanks for my placement and also for hosting the contest. Just at my daughters for dinner, hope your day is going well. Tom
Tor Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Wow Tom, so sorry I missed this one. Great way to stop feeling sorry for one'self after reading this straight up truth of yours. You are so right we should be thankful for all the things we can do and our bodies allow us to do. Great perspective Tom, common sense prevails in this wonderful advice you have given us. I for one will take it my friend. Loved reading this, this morning Tom it was so uplifting. God bless you my friend...
Cunningham Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Thank you very much Michael, Often things don't go our way and we feel sorry for ourselves but forget there are many really struggling in life but make the best of things, it's often a wake up call for us. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Romios Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Tom, to be fully are of another heart’s needs above our own is a virtue you have! Right now in the USA 600 are dead in the USA due to floods and hurricanes. Our Gov at present is heartless. So if any can donate to charities here, it would be appreciated.. people lost homes, chilren, grandchilren..Our picayone, cheap Administation is giving them only 750 dollars? You will know that is like a slap in their face. So to all, an immediate need is burning bright here. Great poem, Tom. Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, wow, that is a small amount of money especially when you think how much it gives in aid to other countries. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Hi Tom back to what i love doing, writing and reading poetry. This is an exceptional poem of love and concern for others, I REALLY LIKE IT LOTS AND LOTS! Blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 12:28 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, im happy you enjoyed it. Being helpful and nice to others costs nothing. Tom
Fowler Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Uplifting and applicable to so many. A reminder that there is always someone in a worse position than you...buck up! and assist where/when you can. :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Thank you very much Linda when I was struggling to walk before my op it opened my eyes that there are some real good people on hand to help, now when I see someone struggling I'm only too happy to help them if I can. Tom
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 6:36 PM
Dear Tom this is such a profound write and so wise and what a reminder to so many that today dwell in darkness and forget to appreciate so much of what they have , those little things that we are privileged to have, and less fortunate cant even afford. This poem is such a powerful write! And i love every word woven here especially “ We take for granted a walk in the woods or a stroll on a beach But for the less able these things are way out of their reach” hits home! Thank you for sharing this. Pleasure reading this
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 8:54 PM
Thank you very much IE, up until last year I was struggling to walk so experienced disability, had a spinal op last year and it's given me my life back, I take nothing for granted now and it's made me much more aware about others who are struggling in life. Hope you're having a lovely week. Tom
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September 2, 2024 at 6:54 PM
Tom, I really like the part about offering help to others. That really does make life pleasant for us. You are making me smile!!
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 12:29 AM
Thank you very much Duke, a helping hand or even just a smile can make someones day and it costs you nothing. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Leach Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Beautiful and outstanding. A wise poem.
Cunningham Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Thank you very much Alesia, we often moan about trivial things but many folks struggle on a daily basis without complaining. It puts things into perspective. Tom
Rodgers Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Dear Tom, Oh how I love the expressions of appreciating one's blessings, cultivating empathy for others and offer support to those in need. All while maintaining a positive perspective on life's challenges. So well expressed and said. - Blessings, My Dear friend, Daniel
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 7:54 AM
Thank you very much Daniel, I'm always aware that many things I do others struggle to cope with, it's so easy to forget sometimes how much we have, I'm forever grateful. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
Kaufman Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Hi Tom, This is a wonderful write to remind us all to be grateful for our health and gifts. Perfect rhymes as well, highly motivational. Blessings to you
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Thank you very much Nancy, I'm happy you enjoyed it, it's easy to forge sometimes that things we take for granted others really struggle. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:12 AM
Such a lovely piece with true sentiments Tom, nice rhyme and flow too. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Thank you very much Gordon, I hope you too have a blessed day. Tom
Maverick Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Very true insights Tom..A couple of months or More ago I watched a rather old lady 80s ? Coming along the sidewalk she had a uoright Shopping trolly, which was also a walking aid i Noted she was bent at the waist this would be From birth I'd say? she really only could see the Floor her once navy blue coat, was now a stone Grey on her back and a mid blue underneath i Suppose she was unmarried.? One wonders? I Said a prayer for her and thanked God I was still Strong.'
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Thank you very much Joe, there are many in life like her who try and make the best of life, makes you realise how lucky we are. Hope you've had a lovely weekend. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:07 AM
the many little treasures and pleasures of life must always be acknowledged for they bring us the best gifts of joy and gratitude... lovely thoughts plus rhythmic tones well portrayed, tom!
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Thank you very much Nette, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Gentile Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:26 AM
Wise and wonderful words Tom! your lovely lines are a reminder that we need to keep in mind every day! Excellent write! Happy Saturday!!!
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Thank you very much Mike, it never costs anything to give someone a helping hand. Hope you too have a lovely weekend. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 11:05 AM
wonderful message poem, Tom. Do you watch America's Got Talent, by chance. One of the guys who was popular on the show is a kid who breaks dance with ONE leg. It's so amazing how well that some with disabilites are able to adapt.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 10:15 PM
thanks .Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Thank you Andrea, we don't have that show on here, it amazes me how people rise above their disabilities and lead near normal lives, they are a great inspiration to us all. Tom
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 9:25 PM
Lovely poem with realistic advice, we truly have much to be thankful for, Tom:) enjoyed this didactic piece:)
Cunningham Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 10:55 PM
Thank you very much Joanna, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. We often take things for granted sometimes unaware many are really struggling with everyday things. Just one small act of kindness can really make someones day. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 11:45 AM
I agree! Years ago read a poem with a similar sentiment. We must stop and realize how much we have.
Cunningham Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Kim, we have to make the most of good health while we have it. All the money in the world doesn't buy it. Tom
Goff Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Love it Tom! a reason for being....for others
Cunningham Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Thank you very much James, it costs nothing to lend a helping hand, before I had my op I was struggling to walk and it opened my eyes that there are good people about, people offering their seats on the bus (like a greyhound) I remember waiting to cross a busy road and a car pulled up to let me cross, the traffic was backing up so I moved as quick as I could lol. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 9:08 PM
SO well said, Tom~~very moving and meaningful! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 11:07 PM
Thank you very much Janice, I remember when I was in hospital there was a man there trapped in his own body, they had to do everything for him, it does make you think. Tom
May Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 4:18 PM
We have to count our blessings, Well said Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you very much Joseph, very true, we only have to look around us and see how others live in other parts of the world, we're so lucky to have access to medical help. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:57 PM
I liked the rhythm, flow and rhyme in this one plus the theme. Yes, sometimes we forget how blessed we are with and in life. Every time I see someone less fortunate than me, I say there goes I if God hadn't cared for me in times when my life could have gone in that direction. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Thank you very much Sara, compared to some we have it easy and often forget how lucky we are. Tom
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 2:02 AM
- A good start to the day - Gratitude doesn't require much time or energy... and it has positive effects on our mental health - Thanks for this uplifting poem, Tom :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Sometimes we take too much for granted, our health is our wealth as I'm finding out. Tom
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