Beautiful Scars Poet Free verse

You Are My Universe

if galaxies were meant to be mine, i’d give you the universe in its entirety
constellations call your name, and stardust descends in mellifluous romance-
craving sempiternal love you rescued me from...drowning in the ebon sky


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Threesome Poetry Contest
1.4.20
Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2020 at 6:17 PM this is SO amazing. I love it, Lu Loo!! Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:07 PM - Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise Beautiful Scars January 14, 2020 at 3:09 PM many thanks sweet Sunshine x:-)-luloo

John Watt January 13, 2020 at 1:05 AM Wow. I love "stardust descends in mellifluous romance". Congrats on your top placement, LuLoo ~ John Beautiful Scars January 14, 2020 at 3:08 PM thank you dear John x:-)-luloo

Eve Roper January 12, 2020 at 12:24 PM Mmm, romantic , Laura, congratulations on your win in Silent One’s “Threesome”. Hugs Eve Beautiful Scars January 14, 2020 at 3:08 PM :):):) - thank you sweet Eve! x:-)-luloo

Jenish Somadas January 12, 2020 at 11:02 AM Congrats on your great win.. Beautiful Scars January 12, 2020 at 12:00 PM many thanks dear Jenish x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton January 12, 2020 at 9:25 AM Great write Laura, not surprised to see this one at the top! Beautiful Scars January 12, 2020 at 12:00 PM thank you once again dear friend! x:-)-luloo

Silent One January 12, 2020 at 7:20 AM I love it when your romantic side comes out and i see this is a great dedication to your man.. we should all have a love like this... love the use of words... Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Beautiful Scars January 12, 2020 at 12:00 PM thank you dear SO, he is my man and I'm not afraid to show it! lol I am honored to be at the top, many thanks x:-)-luloo

Quoth Theraven January 5, 2020 at 7:56 PM Lu Loo, Very nice use of universe in your verse' skies. Another wonderful poem and entry. Good luck in Silent One's .......challenge. Note: Yeah, sure SO didn't expect a few witty comments(?) Next time a contest name throws a meatball like that over the plate., I'm swinging. -Richard Beautiful Scars January 12, 2020 at 11:58 AM sempiternal means a deep forever. :) thank you dear Richard, you are so sweet all the time. x:-)-luloo Quoth Theraven January 5, 2020 at 7:58 PM Got to look up sempiternal.,that's a new one. Did I mention that 'you are my universe' is a Fave? -R

Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 5:45 PM Lovely, LuLoo. Beautiful Scars January 12, 2020 at 11:59 AM thank you lovely Line x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton January 4, 2020 at 1:54 PM Wow you've done it again Laura, every write gets better and better! Beautiful Scars January 12, 2020 at 11:59 AM thank you dear friend x:-)-luloo