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You Are My Universe

if galaxies were meant to be mine, i’d give you the universe in its entirety constellations call your name, and stardust descends in mellifluous romance- craving sempiternal love you rescued me from...drowning in the ebon sky _________________________________ Threesome Poetry Contest 1.4.20 Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2020 6:17:00 PM

this is SO amazing. I love it, Lu Loo!! Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2020 2:07:00 PM

- Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise

Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2020 3:09:00 PM

many thanks sweet Sunshine x:-)-luloo

John Watt

Date: 1/13/2020 1:05:00 AM

Wow. I love "stardust descends in mellifluous romance". Congrats on your top placement, LuLoo ~ John

Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2020 3:08:00 PM

thank you dear John x:-)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2020 12:24:00 PM

Mmm, romantic , Laura, congratulations on your win in Silent One’s “Threesome”. Hugs Eve

Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2020 3:08:00 PM

:):):) - thank you sweet Eve! x:-)-luloo

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/12/2020 11:02:00 AM

Congrats on your great win..

Lu Loo
Date: 1/12/2020 12:00:00 PM

many thanks dear Jenish x:-)-luloo

John Hamilton

Date: 1/12/2020 9:25:00 AM

Great write Laura, not surprised to see this one at the top!

Lu Loo
Date: 1/12/2020 12:00:00 PM

thank you once again dear friend! x:-)-luloo

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2020 7:20:00 AM

I love it when your romantic side comes out and i see this is a great dedication to your man.. we should all have a love like this... love the use of words... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Lu Loo
Date: 1/12/2020 12:00:00 PM

thank you dear SO, he is my man and I'm not afraid to show it! lol I am honored to be at the top, many thanks x:-)-luloo

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/5/2020 7:56:00 PM

Lu Loo, Very nice use of universe in your verse' skies. Another wonderful poem and entry. Good luck in Silent One's .......challenge. Note: Yeah, sure SO didn't expect a few witty comments(?) Next time a contest name throws a meatball like that over the plate., I'm swinging. -Richard

Lu Loo
Date: 1/12/2020 11:58:00 AM

sempiternal means a deep forever. :) thank you dear Richard, you are so sweet all the time. x:-)-luloo

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/5/2020 7:58:00 PM

Got to look up sempiternal.,that's a new one. Did I mention that 'you are my universe' is a Fave? -R