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You Are My Sonshine

Inspired by Carrie Richard’s poem “Unlatched” YOU ARE MY SONSHINE Our song together, just you and me “You are my sunshine…” Our song belongs, only to us And how I used to love to pull you on my lap, even catching the last few times, before you left for college… A son belongs to his mom for so short a time Yet how wonderful to see your success in your job with your wife and kids You are still my sunshine, my only sunshine a title belonging to an only son who used to call his mom his princess and heave his empty wallet out of his pocket “Get whatever you want, Mom” Memories so strong that hold open doors for the one woman in his life a lifetime ago with a handsome bow tied on a moonlight cradle Now I cradle the phone to my ear with bended heart listening to the grownup man... Oh how proud I am. 11/16/2017

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Date: 1/10/2018 6:35:00 PM
Wonderful homage to Mother and Son, personally I couldn't wait to get rid of mine, regards and happy new year, Kevin x
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:27:00 PM
How I wish I still had this relationship with my sonshine. Beautifully written Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. Best to you <3
Date: 11/17/2017 10:35:00 AM
Dear Kim,....First of all, I am so thankful that you have stopped some of my poems, and so appreciate your sweet and thoughtful comments. We seem to be of like-minds, with such loving and sentimental ties to our children.Your poem is an example of a special kind of love that binds you with your son. And the title also reflects my life as well. "You Are My Sunshine" is rather like our family anthem around here. A song we, as a family, have always sung around many campfires thru the years. Thank you, and thank you for your support. I often have felt forgotten since I've taken a break from PS. :) xox
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 5:08:00 PM
Lovely comment, dear Carrie! I love that it is your family song! Blessings...many blessings! <3
Date: 11/17/2017 9:41:00 AM
How wonderful. very sweet poem. What a special relationship. Lo e your title too. Congrats, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Line!
Date: 11/17/2017 9:38:00 AM
A heartfelt poem of love and memories ---uniquely expressed as only a mother can! I paused and smiled reading "Get whatever you want, Mom"!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 9:53:00 AM
He was so cute! Just having a wallet made him feel rich! It’s those moments that make life rich!

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