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Hélène, by Gustave Moreau


 

You Are My Muse - a Tribute To Eileen

I wonder: would you make me your mistress
lost in a world of poetry under your wings
I’ll celebrate heaven's gift; more to me a tortured love
wretched wishes: life's greatest anguish 

our heaven's in sight, you see my eyes
voyeur, I see you looking at me
don't try to love me if you can’t, I will not break 
the day will come I can resist you

taking a chance, there is beauty; life’s symphony
gentle murmurs – the scent of your soul
indulgent love, you tempt me –  hold on to me
to bloom in red flame amidst the fallen petals

if you wonder how do I love thee
I'm here because words spoken by you
you touch me with your words from your heart’s caverns
your maze of words blazing across your sky
speak my language; the coupling of our souls

I have seen those lips, that smile
you said there's more to life what you want
life is short; kiss away my pain

there is a place beyond perceptions
from a distance, I love to watch you fly
fireflies or fairies: the difference between you and me
out of the wilderness I thirst for an angel

way back when the day we met it was easy 
my need for love; a place to lay my head
in tenderness of night touch me like you mean it
in the moment the journey of your lips
my lover's words a melody divine
glitter on my skin, serenading the senses
stream of memories; you listen to me

they ask me why I love you through the mist
you keep me grounded – must it be black and white
you are my spring; you are my sanity; my muse

I always believed wishes are for fools’ judgement
if I were stronger the essence of love the reward nearby
a dream within reality, a chasing after the wind
if I could hold back the dawn: serenity and peace

I used to write for you; just let the poet be
your words pale, were I to know you too will go
don’t tell my heart; let me write; don’t censor me
the day you gently let me go, my love endures

once love has died spare a few kinds words for me
remembered echoes put on hold; I'll die in peace 
when velvet turns to stone, let my tombstone read:
the scent of poems past never to be erased



Poems by Eileen Manassian: 
A collage of titles spanning a period from 2012 – 2021, WITH PERMISSION. 
NB Every single word of this poem, including the title ('You are' & 'My Muse') was derived verbatim from 112 titles -- list on request (out of possibly near 1,700 titles) of Ms Manassian’s poems, hence I did not put the poem in quotation marks.

Poetic form:CENTO.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Manassian Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:04 PM
Oh! I'm thrilled with your win, my dear. Thank you once again for this lovely honor. I'm so glad Richard found it deserving of a first place win. Congrats and thank you!!!
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:46 PM
You are welcome. Thank you, Eileen, for allowing me to use the titles in this contest. Your poetry is truly inspiring!
La France Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Suzette, congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest with this beautiful tribute to Eileen, love and serenity _ Constance
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, Constance :))
Kauffman Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Wonderful job crafting Eileen's titles into a winning poem Suzette. Congratulations on your win.
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, Sam :))
Ligon Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Wow, great job compiling so many titles!
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:48 PM
Thanks, Juliet :)) Eileen's poetry is truly inspirational.
Alex Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Wonderful work. Congratulations!
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Thank you :))
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:15 AM
Brilliant honour to an amazing poetess, Suzette, congratulations :)
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Thanks, Jo :))
Roper Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Suzette, great use of the titles to have inspired you to form your verse, a great tribute to a lovely lady. Congratulations on your win in Richard's Title Wave contest. Hugs Eve
Richards Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Many thanks for the compliment, Eve.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Congrats on your first place finish. I am especially fond of Eileen and really enjoyed how you stitched together her titles. Bravo and thanks for entering my contest.
Richards Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Thank you for the honour, Rick.
Manassian Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Oh dear, kind, and generous Suzette. I'm beyond honored that you used my poems for this. I had such a surreal moment going through the lines...sensing the familiarity of the words, yet taking in a whole new poem with words interconnected that shows the soul of the one who put it together! How is that even possible? You did it. I'm honored...and grateful. This will always be a treasure. Thank you!
Richards Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Like with any poem, the greatest challenge was to know when to stop :))
Richards Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. I'm honoured by your praise. Blessings, Su xxx
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