Lewis Raynes Poet Quatrain

You Are My Free, I Miss You So Much

I love you, I miss you, my mind thinks about you, 
Are you up and about or asleep?
What moments do you give to others around you, 
Are your moments expensive or cheap?

Your book holds my tears, your words are in bold,
And I read them aloud every day.
And I watch the video of what we once were,
Hours of parking in the driveway.

Each day I dream of our sexy future together,
When I return it’ll be just you and me.
And we can hold each other in a tender embrace,
You’re my car, my classic, you’re my free.



For Nicola's contest Long distance love 14th October

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CayCay Godwin October 15, 2016 at 9:02 PM I read below and want to share that my love was and is my old 280Z and, yes, freeeee is the word for that car's feel. How I miss it. Love yet another clever twist on a poem from you, Lewis ... CayCay Lewis Raynes October 16, 2016 at 9:58 PM I love each of the 260 280 series, i miss her so much. i agree with u, she really did make me feel free.

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2016 at 6:54 PM ahhh, it's the car!!! That was very cool how you made that cute twist. Love it. Lewis Raynes October 16, 2016 at 9:58 PM Thanks Andrea, I miss her so much.... will have another one day.

Casarah Nance October 13, 2016 at 7:50 PM now I wonder what kind of car makes you fancy so much?... very sleek write ;) Lewis Raynes October 13, 2016 at 9:59 PM my old Datsun 260z...... twin carb..... super hot