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You Are My Flesh and My Bone

If I were to say you are a fallen angel I'd be insulting you. Complimenting you to be beautiful, But evil in your ways. Comparing you to a fruit tree, That has a breath of a rotten fruit. Taking you as a drug that gives me strength, Only to lose it and die because of its effect. Like Eve in the garden of Eden, Instead of being a helper, she became a burden. If I describe you, I'd be giving myself glory. Rather unite with me, So that we can share the glory. Angels serve us, so how can I make you my maid? Man are higher than angels, So are woman because they're from man. If you came from my ribs, Shouldn't I try to keep you and re-unite my body structure? I have sown you, And now I have to reap the all of you. You are my flash and my bone, Ngizodla konke namathambo; just to get my strength back. I am the glory of God, And you are my glory; Thus, the pleasure to the sense of my mind. You are beautiful beyond words, For you were not created by words like plants and seas, But by my body; without you I'm incomplete. You are an artist, And art is your offspring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/30/2014 10:30:00 AM
Lucky, Interesting , romantic write...nice work, Robert
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Date: 1/5/2014 11:41:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS SO AWESOME.... WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP HOPE U ENJOY IT
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:49:00 PM
Wow Lucky, now that's one awesome free verse poem... A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Lucky Zwane
Date: 1/3/2014 4:52:00 AM
Thank you. I tried to enter your contest, but I can't
Date: 1/2/2014 8:16:00 PM
Lucky, an awesome free verse ballad... Awesome ending... . Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Lucky Zwane
Date: 1/3/2014 4:28:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your efford.
Date: 1/2/2014 7:45:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Lucky ! - A very good poem, well done your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucky Zwane
Date: 1/3/2014 4:29:00 AM
Thank you. I will start on commenting on yours dear

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