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I am writing this poem to my husband ... I met you at the art gallery and will never forget that day my eyes grazed over you and I was left breathless so handsome, though I thought you needed a shave then, realized it was a look you could be a model vary tall, you looked to be fit, sinewy your dark hair touched the collar of your worn jean jacket in a romantic way and fell over one side of your face your jeans were fashionably faded the backpack had seen better days you looked like a struggling artist looking down at me you smiled and I was swept away in the ocean of your blue eyes and I was lost I like your hair you said in a deep French accented voice I love the color blushing I said thank you you look very pretty today I looked down at my whimsical flowered dress we walked together looking at the art then, you stood in front of me can I be so bold as to ask you to come for a coffee and I could not resist we sat in the cafeteria talking for hours about all sorts of things and that was the beginning we were from the start spiritually connected as we both liked the same things like art, nature, poetry and writing, cooking and what was happening in the world we walked endless forests and meadows sat by streams talking then, one day while watching ducks on a park bench you leaned over and kissed me and I could not hold back my aching I kissed you back with trembling passion back home we took an unchained intoxicating journey of abandon it was a dance of love that left us both aglow that is when I knew, for sure that I loved you days turned into months and months and each time I saw you it was like the first time at the art gallery I was your love captive you had my heart and soul so, when you asked me to marry you it was ethereal like a dream and of course, I said yes, yes you wrap me in your love each day you are my one true love forever, and evermore and this poem is for you, love _______________________ March 06, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/You Are My Everything Copyright Protected, ID 03-1529-940-06 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, For You, Love sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 03/12/2023 First Place

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Date: 3/13/2023 2:33:00 AM
You wrote it well. Writting your inside love Expessing forever love Congratulations on your top win , Constance.
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:33:00 AM
Alfonso, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/12/2023 11:13:00 PM
wow beautiful loving poem penned; lovely to read; congrats for the placement
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:33:00 AM
Mahtab, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/12/2023 7:11:00 PM
You have strong romantic memories, Constance, of a love that will never die, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:34:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the nice comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/12/2023 6:04:00 AM
Such a wonderful tribute to your spouse, and what explicit descriptions you can convey about the search for love that lasts. Congratulations on your top win, Constance. Blessings
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:34:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations blessings, Constance
Date: 3/12/2023 4:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem, I hope he is still with you in all the things you shared, I'm sorry to hear of the accident in the comments x
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:35:00 AM
Dilly, thank you so much for the compassion and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/12/2023 4:13:00 AM
Just beautiful. love this so. God bless you my friend. Congrats too :) Love, Gina
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:36:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/7/2023 12:20:00 PM
- One cannot say it more beautifully, Constance :) - hugs
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Date: 3/8/2023 3:55:00 AM
Sunshine, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings and hugs, Constance
Date: 3/7/2023 12:09:00 PM
Hello Constance, oh how romantic. A deep love for your husband. Your soulmate. Love & Friendship/Darlene/
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Date: 3/8/2023 10:15:00 AM
Hello Constance. you have a strong bond with you husband although he is gone. You still love him. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/
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Date: 3/8/2023 3:58:00 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for the compliment. I love my husband so much always and forever but must admit to you that I lost him in a tragic car crash, yet this is a love that death cannot destroy, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/7/2023 12:01:00 PM
A wonderful love story/write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 3/8/2023 3:59:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and writing, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/7/2023 11:57:00 AM
Wow, what a great dedication to your husband, what details you bring to life in finding true love, love this , : )
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Date: 3/8/2023 4:02:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment. I wrote this poem with true love in my heart for the love I shared with my husband, but sadly I must tell you I lost him several years ago to death, yet the love we shared lives on, and the dagger to my heart still bleeds, blessings, Constance

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