You Are My All - For Rain and Dark Contest

And then it hits me.
My limbs fail as I slide 
inexorably to the floor.
She is gone. 

Cocooned within a catatonic coma, 
all that was my world is contracted 
into a singularity of desolation 
as the abyss engulfs my creaking frame.

And one by one, my senses forget their lines 
as they coalesce into a jumble 
of white noise 
and blank, black horizons.

The boom of a thousand drummers
pound relentlessly through my brain,
my clenched fingers pulsating in response
to this terrifying, trembling self-embrace.

My tongue curls at the metal bitterness of acrimony,
giving shape to the shadows 
which creep unfettered into my undefended psyche,
shutting tight the weary windows of my eyes.

And now comes the rain.
In sodden response to my dilemma,
hissing its disapproval of my circumstance
and pounding the rooftops in rattling discord.

Tapping impatiently in judgement upon me
and gurgling its displeasure; 
hammering the windows in utter contempt.
Squeezing tighter my crushing seizure.

A billion lights invade my mind as breathing ceases,
but the valley of darkness sees a sunrise
as her voice pierces the gloom -
and I am once again alive.

23rd August 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Romaine Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Hey Bill, BIG congratulations on your win in the contest! Excellent writing and I especially love the "breakthrough" moment. Be Blessed, Neva
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 12:37 AM
Congrats on ur superb first place win with this awesome write Bill!
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:22 PM
great ending, SHE comes and sets it all right!! great way to do the theme on rain and dark. I can't recall if I tried that contest or not . BIG congrats on top win with Rob!
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Bill! I enjoyed reading the experience. Hugs Eve
Carber Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 1:08 PM
I like this, especially the last line-- len carber
Cheema Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Making it larger than life-a true transformation of a poet! Congrats on your win, Bill!
Y. Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Bill, congratulations on your Top win:-)Alexis
Reams Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Congrats on your first place win Bill!
Lindsay Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thanks, Tammy - I actually shed tears writing this. What a softie ;)
Lindsay Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 3:08 PM
I got an N/A again ... wish I knew what I was doing wrong :(
Rycroft Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Is this something you have experienced, It's moving, sounds like your whole heart is in it, lovely xxxxxxxxxxxx
Lindsay Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Thankfully, Wendy, it is not; it was written in response to the contest, but I had to become someone else to write it ... don't like him! ;)
Godwin Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Not since Dave Mason's album, "It's Like She Never Left" have I felt through art the searing pain of someone leaving. Mason used an instrumental of tangible pain. My relationship is healthy, I know love, yet I felt myself being left when I read you. Need I say it? Oh so very good. CayCay
Lindsay Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:53 PM
In truth, I am very happily married ( 15000 days next March 14th ) so I had to go to a very dark place to write this. I had to write it quickly as I was being drawn away from my place of safety. I really appreciate your kind response to my scribbling. ;)
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