You Are Just Standing There In the Dark
You are just standing there in the dark
The look on your face seems grim
The lady of your life has taken lots of abuse
Your outlook looks mighty slim
She feels battered and betrayed
Because, of the way in which you treated her
All of your trust is thrown out the door
Obscurity is present there
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