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You Are Human First

Jewish or Palestinian, You are first human, The war will be useless, Jewish or Palestinian, Only peace has meaning, Made you holy men, Jewish or Palestinian, You are living beings, Dying is not a party, Jewish or Palestinian, Since I was born, This war lasts on earth, Jewish or Palestinian, You make men ashamed, From whatever country they are, Violence won’t solve anything, Jewish or Palestinian, You will have to talk, Jewish or Palestinian, May my poem guide you On the blessed land of the world, To live is to understand. Jewish or Palestinian, You are human first.

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Date: 10/29/2023 11:05:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Yann. Your words are wise, my friend. We are humans first, killing doesn't solve any of the problems that Love can conquer. Peace my friend in France. Bill
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Date: 10/10/2023 7:42:00 PM
Yann, your sincere poem expresses a natural desire for peace. There has never been peace there. Janice
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/11/2023 8:38:00 AM
Thanks janice, you are right, this war last since thousand years or more, read the bible, thanks for stopping by yann
Date: 10/10/2023 7:37:00 PM
A magnificent and powerful poem my friend.If only we all could remember, we must act as humans above all else.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/11/2023 8:39:00 AM
thanks Jerry, it is more easy to write than to accomplish peace, you are right we should remember before acting, violence is unbearable, thank you
Date: 10/10/2023 3:34:00 PM
a powerful poem, Yann. The tragic impossibility of the ongoing war raging in the Middle East is evident in your words. I agree, we're human first. We all bleed, have pain, love, etc. Focusing on differences seems downright inhumane! Sara
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/11/2023 8:42:00 AM
thanks sara, for the supportive comment,what has happened in Israel is inhuman, that inspired me deeply, i am shocked, thanks for the nice comment, have a nice day
Date: 10/10/2023 12:42:00 PM
Some things seem like they are impossible to be resolved. The stupidity of human nature. Great message, Yann
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/11/2023 8:42:00 AM
so true Andrea, stupidity of human nature, no more to add, thanks for sharing
Date: 10/10/2023 12:21:00 PM
your poem reinforces an idea that should be obvious to all humans, yann, but unfortunately, it isn't for way too many people. thanks for saying it so clearly!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/11/2023 8:44:00 AM
thank you so much janice, that should be obvious, i don't really understand violence, thanks for the kind comment

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