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You Are a Part of Me

You are a part of me melted into one You are a sentiment of tender touches You are warm and gentle and assuring I have a place in your heart You are devoted and forgiving You make life worth living I am receptive to your loyalty I spill over with devotion and soulful emotion I am forever lost in your passion Unable to wake from the depths of you I shall eternally float in the ecstasy of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/27/2008 11:58:00 PM
Loved L1 Laura.Excellent writing.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/27/2008 3:52:00 AM
A very passionate write, Laura, you are very blessed, love Kristin
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Date: 9/26/2008 5:53:00 PM
Aw, this is such a beautiful spilling out of deep emotional love for your sweetheart. You are both so very lucky to share such joys of true love. Sigh. So wonderful to read. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/26/2008 5:00:00 PM
hi Laura this is really beautiful and I hope thingss contine that way for you, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/26/2008 11:33:00 AM
very colorful and gentle piece of poetry.
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