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You Are a Part of Me

You are a part of me melted into one You are a sentiment of tender touches You are warm and gentle and assuring I have a place in your heart You are devoted and forgiving You make life worth living I am receptive to your loyalty I spill over with devotion and soulful emotion I am forever lost in your passion Unable to wake from the depths of you I shall eternally float in the ecstasy of you

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Brian Strand

Date: 9/27/2008 11:58:00 PM

Loved L1 Laura.Excellent writing.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/27/2008 3:52:00 AM

A very passionate write, Laura, you are very blessed, love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/26/2008 5:53:00 PM

Aw, this is such a beautiful spilling out of deep emotional love for your sweetheart. You are both so very lucky to share such joys of true love. Sigh. So wonderful to read. Love, Shar

Deneen White

Date: 9/26/2008 5:00:00 PM

hi Laura this is really beautiful and I hope thingss contine that way for you, take care D-nyce

James Foulk

Date: 9/26/2008 11:33:00 AM

very colorful and gentle piece of poetry.