You Are a Part of Me

You are a part of me melted into one
You are a sentiment of tender touches
You are warm and gentle and assuring
I have a place in your heart 
You are devoted and forgiving 
You make life worth living 
I am receptive to your loyalty 
I spill over with devotion and soulful emotion 
I am forever lost in your passion 
Unable to wake from the depths of you 
I shall eternally float in the ecstasy of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 11:58 PM
Loved L1 Laura.Excellent writing.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Reynolds Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 3:52 AM
A very passionate write, Laura, you are very blessed, love Kristin
Winter Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 5:53 PM
Aw, this is such a beautiful spilling out of deep emotional love for your sweetheart. You are both so very lucky to share such joys of true love. Sigh. So wonderful to read. Love, Shar
White Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 5:00 PM
hi Laura this is really beautiful and I hope thingss contine that way for you, take care D-nyce
Foulk Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 11:33 AM
very colorful and gentle piece of poetry.
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