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You are like a beautiful flower freshley sprung in June. You are like a November Rain that smells so sweet. You are like a pure December Snow that's so white it reminds me of how much an angel you are. You are the girl that puts a twinkle in my eye and a smile on my face.

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Date: 4/4/2014 5:50:00 PM
Your poem made me smile. I think it is beautiful.
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Date: 3/31/2014 9:32:00 PM
Very nice, I would love to receive this in a valentine or other-day card. Just for kicks, I'd like to see a month in the last stanza, perhaps her birth month or a wedding month??? Lovely piece
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Date: 3/31/2014 6:39:00 AM
Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, ricky,
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Date: 3/31/2014 3:05:00 AM
Beauty of simplicity...I love it...Best wishes from India...
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