You Are

You are like a
beautiful flower
freshley sprung in June.

You are like a
November Rain
that smells so sweet.

You are like a pure
December Snow
that's so white it reminds
me of how much an
angel you are.

You are the girl that
puts a twinkle in my 
eye and a smile on my face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Nance Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Your poem made me smile. I think it is beautiful.
Poteet Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Very nice, I would love to receive this in a valentine or other-day card. Just for kicks, I'd like to see a month in the last stanza, perhaps her birth month or a wedding month??? Lovely piece
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 6:39 AM
Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, ricky,
Goswami Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Beauty of simplicity...I love it...Best wishes from India...
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