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You and Your Road Rage

You and your Road Rage Should be locked in a cage Way back in the Stone Age You blacken the Space Age Each time you go on a rampage Won't you please try to gauge How you impact the teen-aged You and your Road Rage Your words are an outrage Once released, can't be assuaged They disgrace your 'Golden Age' You and your Road Rage

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/24/2019 6:52:00 AM

Monorhyme which is a lesson for myself; which is why I shall give myself more leisurely classical music in my car rather than the Beach Boys and The Beatles which turns me into a lunatic - and 17 again! Monorhymes are not easy; you have made it seem easy though.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2019 9:32:00 AM

Thanks for the tip of the cap on this monorhyme, Caren. You're right. They're harder than they appear. Best always, gw

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/23/2019 8:16:00 PM

They disgrace your 'Golden Age'. I really loved that line. My teenagers all delighted in embarrassing me at one time or another. This poem is so engaging Gershon. Delightful! : ) xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2019 9:31:00 AM

Connie, I remember the embarrassment all too well --- only I did all the embarrassing. My poor teenagers! In fact, even my little kids knew well such delightful appellations as: You moron! You idiot! You imbecile! And Why can't that jerk drive the speed limit etc. … Once those kind of pleasantries were coming out of my kids' mouths, it was hard to undo the damage! … Thanks for reviewing this one. Best wishes, Gershon