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You and My Writing

Last year I wrote about you in every Sweet way I could In every notebook I had This year You're only mentioned In my Suicide letter.

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Lu Loo

Date: 10/10/2015 8:18:00 PM

powerful...:) -LU

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2015 3:23:00 AM

- A nice poem, Devan! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)

Devan Oliver
Date: 8/31/2015 8:11:00 AM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2015 2:43:00 AM

Devan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Devan Oliver
Date: 8/29/2015 12:07:00 PM

Thank you!

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2015 6:54:00 PM

that is sad for a first poem Devan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Devan Oliver
Date: 8/28/2015 8:07:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Broken Survivor

Date: 8/28/2015 1:48:00 PM

This broke my heart :( i can relate

Devan Oliver
Date: 8/28/2015 1:53:00 PM

Thank you, and hang in there. It'll get better, I promise.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2015 11:49:00 AM

Oh Devan this is so so sad:-( hugs Jan xx

Devan Oliver
Date: 8/28/2015 11:50:00 AM

Thank you, Jan.