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You and Me

You chose to shut me out And I’ve tried to be the best I could be You would rather find love somewhere else So afraid to be loved only by me I have failed My absence, my silence It all got the best of me I had faith and trust you would see But no hope is there now For what we’re meant to be True. You will never know how good together You and I could be

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Deatrice Johnson

Date: 10/30/2016 9:52:00 AM

This poem is very emotional. It very straight forward! I enjoy reading poems like this because sometimes I get lost reading long poems which the meaning has to be interpurtered. It speaks about a personal experience that many people in the world have experienced or may be living through now. I think it will give comfort to those who may be going through similar situations because it lets them know that they are not alone!

Monica Sofia
Date: 10/30/2016 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, I was trying to send the message, I'm glad you liked it <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 3:49:00 PM

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Monica Sofia
Date: 10/27/2016 7:19:00 PM

Thank you. I'm learning, English is not my first language so I hope I'm doing it right

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2016 9:24:00 AM

Very nicely written , expression of your feelings. :)

Monica Sofia
Date: 10/27/2016 7:20:00 PM

Thank you, I hope I'm delivering the message

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/22/2016 7:04:00 AM

That, as readers , we can see, in this touching poetry ...

Monica Sofia
Date: 10/27/2016 7:20:00 PM

Thank you I appreciate your kindness