You and Me (Round Nine)

Your eyes on my eyes. My eye sheds a tear.
Your kiss on my lips. My lips with a smile.
Your breath on my face. I stay for a while.
You feel my embrace. I need to be here.
Your arms do not lie. My mind does not fear.
Your hope takes a step. My hope walks a mile.
Your essence leaves me in love with your style.
You represent the things that I hold dear.
Your desire calls. My desire comes.
Your target is low. My spirits are high.
Your sexiness sings. My sexiness hums.
Your touch on my soul. My soul wants to fly.
I know exactly where you have come from.
Your heart in my hands. My hands to the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/29/2010 8:25:00 AM
MINE IS DONE !!!
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Date: 6/29/2010 3:53:00 AM
Your touch on my soul. My soul wants to fly... just perfect... sarah x
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Date: 6/27/2010 2:59:00 PM
wow, the perfect picture and image of loves dawnings perhaps-so exquisitely portrayed and penned-one could feel the sincerety and love rising from the parchments pages of your soul-nothing better than this, as a writer life and heart-beautiful poem! love, christopher :)
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Date: 6/27/2010 1:40:00 PM
thinking of number 9 ha ha ha ha ha ...
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Date: 6/27/2010 1:38:00 PM
Wow, can't wait to see Sarah's retort!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/27/2010 12:55:00 PM
I have my work cut out ha ha Great write you x sarah x
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Date: 6/27/2010 12:22:00 PM
Great love Sonnet..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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