You and I

My feet dance across the universe
My arms open wide, I spin within
Love has caught me
Wrapped up in your smile, deep inside I climb
Under your skin I breathe you inn
Hopelessly falling
Your perfect crazy heart is mine
As I dream I hold you tight
Beneath this love our cleansing sins, melts into a stolen kiss
Together let's make forever a long slow ride 
Together & eternity you & I..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Honeytip Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Forgot to rate it 7 <3
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March 10, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Yayyyyy....clap clap clap!!!! I LOVE this!! Totally awesome write! Just crazy beautiful...wow :-D Can't wait to read more....love Ruby xxx
Scott Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 12:42 PM
NICEWRITE AGIN LOTS OF EMOTION HEART XX DAVIDSCOTT
Kearley Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 1:41 AM
Very nice! I can really feel the love in this fantastic write.Keep them comming! :o)
Woolford Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 7:04 AM
This is a lovely poem Kerry. Very romantic and passionate. I thinkI like poems like this the best. Easy to relate to and well written. Love Pam.
Bunch Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 6:49 AM
Your passion semms to be culminating to the brink. I truly like the poem. I usually am more into dark vivid imagery, but poems of passion are deep too. Nice poem.
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 4:07 AM
Love in the air, Kerry - Wonderful written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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