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You and I

Starlit skies ,moon dances high and just you and I , lovers move in time, crashing waves around us , a touch of uncontroled lust, but a solitary must , vision of mine flesh intwined minds in a magical trance no words spoken just the wish granted now two hearts pulling arms wrapped around naked twists cool whisper of the night honour and obey day and night hunger captures with breath upon breath to be as one never to be undone to be just you and I

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Date: 10/6/2010 9:12:00 AM
Congrats Sarah, on "Tou and I" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured on homepage today with this passionate write..Good job..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful write Sarah, so much passion.. Congratulations on being featured this week ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:17:00 AM
and a sigh .. lovely poetry, that moved me ... congrates on being featured this week and Sharing this Gem love Jayne
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:36:00 AM
this is beautiful Sarah, glad it was featured this week. Harry
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:16:00 PM
Congrats Sarah on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 6/6/2010 11:00:00 AM
Love it..........Roger xx
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Date: 5/30/2010 7:04:00 AM
This is excellent. I sound like the flow and melody of a song. I like it. Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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Date: 5/27/2010 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind welcome to this site and the nice remarks on my work ,i am new to showing off my work so all remarks and comments good or bad are welcome sarah is smiling ty x ps i am hoping you will all see this message not sure how to reply to you all so if you do get this just let me know ha ha x
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Date: 5/27/2010 12:19:00 PM
Lovely passionate poetry Sarah, a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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Date: 5/27/2010 5:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarah. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 8:22:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family .. enjoyed your creative write .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/26/2010 6:16:00 PM
A fine poem on a passionate love.
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