You and I

Starlit skies ,moon dances high
and just you and I ,
lovers move in time, 
crashing waves around us ,
a touch of uncontroled lust,
but a solitary must ,
vision of mine flesh intwined 
minds in a magical trance
no words spoken just the wish granted

now two hearts pulling 
arms wrapped around naked twists
cool whisper of the night
honour and obey
day and night
hunger captures with breath upon breath
to be as one never to be undone  
to be just 
you and I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Congrats Sarah, on "Tou and I" being featured. Vince
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October 4, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations on being featured on homepage today with this passionate write..Good job..Sara
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Sarah. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Beautiful write Sarah, so much passion.. Congratulations on being featured this week ;) Wilma
Eggins Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:17 AM
and a sigh .. lovely poetry, that moved me ... congrates on being featured this week and Sharing this Gem love Jayne
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October 4, 2010 at 12:36 AM
this is beautiful Sarah, glad it was featured this week. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Congrats Sarah on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..
Page Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Love it..........Roger xx
Spence Sr Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:04 AM
This is excellent. I sound like the flow and melody of a song. I like it. Great job and keep writing. Joseph
Hales Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Thank you so much for the kind welcome to this site and the nice remarks on my work ,i am new to showing off my work so all remarks and comments good or bad are welcome sarah is smiling ty x ps i am hoping you will all see this message not sure how to reply to you all so if you do get this just let me know ha ha x
Fraser Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Lovely passionate poetry Sarah, a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
Brown Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 5:38 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarah. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family .. enjoyed your creative write .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:16 PM
A fine poem on a passionate love.
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