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you lied to me you told me you wouldn't leave. i was trapped in an ally and you left me to grieve, you left me! i had nobody else. you were the only one i had. and you left me.

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Date: 6/3/2017 12:23:00 PM
A very beautiful written sad poem, I hope you best of luck with your rest of life, remember life goes on no matter what happens and one day you ll forgive him/her however I m new on this site and also have same 2 poems and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 3/14/2017 12:33:00 AM
What a sad poem Jaymi. Written well, but so sad... I hope you are well.
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