Dalia Shahein Poet Romanticism

You

They say it's impossible to count the water drops in the ocean - well I say I can when I look at you..
They say that human beings  can't live without a beating heart - well I say I can as long as I have you...
They say that we can't touch heaven until we're dead - well I say they lie cause I can touch you...
Sky is clear but not clear as your heart nor as your soul...
Sun is too hot but it's an iceberg compared to you...
Universe is huge but how can it be so huge , when your heart holds the universe...
Is this the nature fragrance or it is your embrace ?
Does the beauty mean a thing against your face ?
Your so flawless and perfect....
But...
Do you exist......

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White Sage January 17, 2016 at 3:00 PM am sure He exists, because you exist, then absolutely he exists too...excellent write Dalia...superb! Dalia Shahein January 18, 2016 at 6:15 PM Lol....now I'm feeling better to know that , hugs / / :)

Pashang Salehi December 29, 2015 at 5:56 PM Yes I do, but I'm too old ..... Pashang Salehi December 29, 2015 at 11:25 PM You're too kind ... me neither ... Happy new year Dalia Shahein December 29, 2015 at 6:07 PM Lol , I'm glad u do , don't convince me cause I don't care about the age....hugs / / :)

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts December 27, 2015 at 10:01 AM truly a touching and good piece to read. I do believe the You that you speak of exists. God is real. Just as good and evil are. Keep writing more like this one Dalia Shahein December 27, 2015 at 10:09 AM Thank you my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, I appreciate it ..it might be (lol )hugs / :)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2015 at 8:19 AM - Beauty in your words and thoughts in this poem, Dalia - I wish you a peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Dalia Shahein December 5, 2015 at 8:46 AM Thank you very much sweet Anne lise I appreciate your lovely comment.... For u 2 my dear .. Hugs :D

Justin Bordner December 4, 2015 at 2:16 AM Isn't it beautiful, and staggering, how the heart can answer it's own questions Dalia..."The sun is too hot but its an iceberg compared to you...Universe is huge, but how can it be so huge, when your heart holds the universe..." This poem activates my soul and brings me true happiness...J.A.B. Another FAV!! Dalia Shahein December 4, 2015 at 5:13 AM Thank you very much my sweet justin for ur sweet comment I really do appreciate it...I'm so glad that you liked it and so great full that there's someone who can understand what I right so deeply... Hugs :D