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They say it's impossible to count the water drops in the ocean - well I say I can when I look at you..
They say that human beings  can't live without a beating heart - well I say I can as long as I have you...
They say that we can't touch heaven until we're dead - well I say they lie cause I can touch you...
Sky is clear but not clear as your heart nor as your soul...
Sun is too hot but it's an iceberg compared to you...
Universe is huge but how can it be so huge , when your heart holds the universe...
Is this the nature fragrance or it is your embrace ?
Does the beauty mean a thing against your face ?
Your so flawless and perfect....
But...
Do you exist......

    ???

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/17/2016 3:00:00 PM
am sure He exists, because you exist, then absolutely he exists too...excellent write Dalia...superb!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/18/2016 6:15:00 PM
Lol....now I'm feeling better to know that , hugs / / :)
Date: 12/29/2015 5:56:00 PM
Yes I do, but I'm too old .....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/29/2015 11:25:00 PM
You're too kind ... me neither ... Happy new year
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/29/2015 6:07:00 PM
Lol , I'm glad u do , don't convince me cause I don't care about the age....hugs / / :)
Date: 12/27/2015 10:01:00 AM
truly a touching and good piece to read. I do believe the You that you speak of exists. God is real. Just as good and evil are. Keep writing more like this one
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/27/2015 10:09:00 AM
Thank you my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, I appreciate it ..it might be (lol )hugs / :)
Date: 12/5/2015 8:19:00 AM
- Beauty in your words and thoughts in this poem, Dalia - I wish you a peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/5/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thank you very much sweet Anne lise I appreciate your lovely comment.... For u 2 my dear .. Hugs :D
Date: 12/4/2015 2:16:00 AM
Isn't it beautiful, and staggering, how the heart can answer it's own questions Dalia..."The sun is too hot but its an iceberg compared to you...Universe is huge, but how can it be so huge, when your heart holds the universe..." This poem activates my soul and brings me true happiness...J.A.B. Another FAV!!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/4/2015 5:13:00 AM
Thank you very much my sweet justin for ur sweet comment I really do appreciate it...I'm so glad that you liked it and so great full that there's someone who can understand what I right so deeply... Hugs :D