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You I never thought that I would Fall in love with such an incredible man as you You fill my every day with warm sunshine God must have known that eventually you'd be mine You make me melt inside with your gentle kisses And your loving embrace When I'm in your arms, it's always a comforting place You are always there to wipe a tear from my soft green eyes Baby, I know you never like to see me cry And I hope that you will never, ever tell me "good-bye" So, just to let you know I quietly say a prayer each night when I'm in our bed "God, please let our love be forever strong" And you climb into bed next to me, holding me tight "Baby, you say. I love you deeply and everything is going to be alright"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/20/2013 11:50:00 AM
words of a love so strong and true. A feeling of togetherness and devotion is written in each line. good job
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Karla Deal
Date: 9/20/2013 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Robin. Ummmm...do I know you? I went to H.S. with a friend with exactly the same name as yours. We actually graduated the same year-1982. Are you the same Robin Davis from Kimball HS in Dallas?
Date: 9/19/2013 10:15:00 PM
cute love poem. very sincere and honest. full of emotion and joy. nice job
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Karla Deal
Date: 9/19/2013 10:23:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read one of my poems. And thank you for your sweet comment as well. Karla~

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