You

you
need i say more
you are the one that makes me laugh
yet makes me cry
you
dont you already know
my heart beats
you help me grow
you
cant you see it in my eyes
how i look at you
what i think of you
you 
what else is new
i just dream about you
cant stop thinking of you
you
when i say i love you
that is nothing new
you know that already
you
i feel us falling apart
why did i fall
when i should grow
you
do you feel regret
for think about me
the way you do
you
do you think im a mistake
i think i am
my nana agrees
you
when you kiss me
i feel like it is not like our first kiss
like you lost intrest
just tell me the truth
you
i love you so much
but do you still love me
like you did 
when i was new
you
are my entirety
you fill me with joy
but what about you
you
do i make you dance with joy
like you make me every night
before i sleep
you
why do i think you have grown bored with me
you seam happy to see me
but why cant i feel it
you
do you think i am a mess up
my family thinks i am
what is wrong with me
you
help me
i am falling 
deeper and deeper
you
save me
i am drowning
into a black abyss
you 
you once were my hero
but now you make me cry too
you 
the one that i love
you
my Equinox 
you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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