Notes About The Poem

Written 1/19/25 For Best Romantic Poem contest sponsor Emile Pinet

 

 

You

You are a starry eyed night
A delightful cup of red wine
For when again we warmly unite
I’m sure to lose track of time

I dip in you like a silver spoon
Yet never ever can get enough 
Touch like a flower maroon bloom
Scents that I lament for in love

Like a magnet I attract your kiss
Kinetic energy light up with spark
You grow my mind with blue blitz
Your every word uplifts my heart

Turquoise times with you the best
Love grows like vines of happiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Brotherton Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 7:24 PM
A delightful and romantic poem, Karen.
Jones Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 8:30 PM
You are kind thanks Jerry!
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 11:39 AM
A lovely romantic poem, dear
Jones Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 3:21 AM
I love red wine. Classic sonnet.
Jones Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Thanks for reading Victor!
M  Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Passion with your chosen one Karen hehe!! A lovely romantic write my friend! Debx
Jones Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 5:48 PM
Thank you Deb! Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 7:11 PM
This is so sweet ans beautiful. It mirrors a perfect world where love always has respect. I enjoy the serenity.
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 7:26 PM
Happy you like it Hilda!
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Let nes with passion created. Looks like passion …is your station. Pangie xoxr Best wishes
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Pangie!
Bohack Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 3:11 PM
nice flow, deep emotions ~ Amy
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:09 PM
Glad you like it!
Read Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 10:03 AM
A poem of love is top of my list, I wish you well Karen in the contest. xx
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 10:47 AM
Thanks John!
mysore Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 9:44 PM
vines of happiness!! romantic write dear poet.
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:15 AM
Thank you so much!
Hassall Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 1:19 PM
I love this! I love the images and unique adjectives. Nicely written!
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Aw thanks so much Kathleen! I appreciate that.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 9:44 AM
WOW!!! I love your "You" write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day..................
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Paula and have a blessed day!
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