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Any Topic Any Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 09/19/2023

You

                
                           I 
                    was lost
                 in the waves
               of a black sea
            surfing with battles,
               when I saw you
                 at first time,
                     love was
                         you

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Christina Bowring Date: 9/21/2023 7:20:00 AM This poem is delightfully romantic dear Maria. Says so much in a few lines. Really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest my friend. Xx:) Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 9/21/2023 9:41:00 AM Hi Christina. It's a ninette, not easy for me to write more than free verse, but I try to explore and get experience in other poetry ways. The contests are not too important, but a way to learn and on the other hand, keeps me on writing. Thank you my dear. Big hugxxx)

Bill Baker Date: 9/19/2023 3:49:00 PM A lovely short poem, Maria. good luck in the contest! Bill Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 9/19/2023 4:24:00 PM It' s a Ninette, they are short. Thank you again Bill. Love

Yann Rolland Date: 9/19/2023 2:35:00 PM this is so nice, it works as a metaphor too thanks yann Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 9/19/2023 2:39:00 PM My friend, Yann. Thank you so much. I hope that pebble in your shoe didn't hurt too much. Blessings my friend. Have a nice evening...!