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Any Topic Any Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 09/19/2023

I was lost in the waves of a black sea surfing with battles, when I saw you at first time, love was you

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Christina Bowring

Date: 9/21/2023 7:20:00 AM

This poem is delightfully romantic dear Maria. Says so much in a few lines. Really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest my friend. Xx:)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/21/2023 9:41:00 AM

Hi Christina. It's a ninette, not easy for me to write more than free verse, but I try to explore and get experience in other poetry ways. The contests are not too important, but a way to learn and on the other hand, keeps me on writing. Thank you my dear. Big hugxxx)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/19/2023 3:49:00 PM

A lovely short poem, Maria. good luck in the contest! Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/19/2023 4:24:00 PM

It' s a Ninette, they are short. Thank you again Bill. Love

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/19/2023 2:35:00 PM

this is so nice, it works as a metaphor too thanks yann

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/19/2023 2:39:00 PM

My friend, Yann. Thank you so much. I hope that pebble in your shoe didn't hurt too much. Blessings my friend. Have a nice evening...!