Jay Narain Poet Free verse

You

When I see your amorous image in the moon,
Clouds cover it up, make us drift evermore.

When I carve your image in the sands of the beach,
Waves come and snatch you from me.

When I adore your image in the lake,
Wind gusts come and scatter my dreams.

I have engraved your picture in my heart,
No one in the world could ever erase it from my heart.

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Christuraj Alex August 18, 2023 at 7:45 PM "I have engraved your picture in my heart, No one in the world could ever erase it from my heart" - indeed, no one can erase. Beautiful work. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne August 18, 2023 at 1:43 PM What endures is truly the love of another. As your prophetically write, Jay, an engagement of the heart. Sincere best wishes and congratulations! Brian

Paula Goldsmith August 17, 2023 at 10:20 AM "Good Luck" on your "You" write. I enjoyed reading it. I love your line "No one in the world could ever erase it from my heart." So very true. Have a great day.............

Valsa George August 17, 2023 at 5:14 AM A firm affirmation of love. No one can erase that image ! Beautifully composed. All the Best dear friend .

Joanna Daniel August 16, 2023 at 7:38 PM Wonderful poem, Jay:) keep her safe in your heart:)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 16, 2023 at 3:38 PM Hello Jay a lovely poem filled with love. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Sotto Poet August 16, 2023 at 10:33 AM Jay, your use of imagery is exceptional as always. Your writing is of high quality, my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 10:25 AM - ... When I write your name in the snow, it melts into water ... lovely poem, Jay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs