You

You smile like crescent moon in summer nights;
A child in me awakes~ I feel aglow;
You hum like symphony in sublime heights~
A voice within me sings of long ago.
  


16 August 2021

Flair and Fun Quatrain Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger
1st place
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Junaid Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 11:24 AM
pretty and nostalgic
George Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 3:56 AM
A beautiful quatrain, Jez !
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. A smile is the best. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Kauffman Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 9:34 AM
JCB this is simply delightful with lovely images! Congratulations on your first place win. Love your musical reference! Sending you blessings.
Evans Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 7:59 AM
So lovely. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:27 AM
beautifully penned, congrats on your win JCB:-) hugs Jan xx
Alex Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Wonderful 'You' Beautiful lines. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Pretty!
Buehler Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Enchanting! Good luck in the contest, with this charming entry. :)
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