You

How fresh you are; you are a summer breeze.
I am the leaves of trees.
You blow my way and make me want to dance.
You have me in a trance. . .

So guileless too, you do not even know
you emanate a glow.
You are my sun, and Darling, brilliantly,
I see you shine for me!

I know this for the heavens up above
are witness to your love.
*Look at the stars, look how they shine for you
and everything you do.” (last two lines from Cold Play -Yellow)

Feb. 16, 2020
For Silent One's Famous Poetic Lines 3 - Love Songs Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/9/2020 10:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement my friend! You did a beautiful job seamlessly weaving the theme into your poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2020 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium win Andrea. I am enjoying time with Carissa. Her birthday is tomorrow. xxoo
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2020 7:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2020 6:47:00 AM
Nice take on the contest Andrea.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/19/2020 5:32:00 PM
Best wishes, Andrea for your golen quilled verse. Panagiota xx
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2020 10:38:00 PM
You blow my way and make me want to dance... Beautiful lines.. Good luck in the contest Andrea..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2020 2:21:00 AM
Awesome love poem from your creative pen. I like the long line / short line cadence to this, and how you bring in the imagery of nature to describe your love. WD&GL!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2020 10:45:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2020 6:14:00 PM
I almost picked this one Andrea, but then ended up choosing Dylan's song. You brought nature into your poem too. Loved it! xxoo
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2020 5:43:00 PM
this is wonderful, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2020 4:13:00 PM
Lovely words to the song by Cold Play. Good luck in the contest. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2020 3:58:00 PM
The song,"Yellow" by Cold Play is a tough act to follow! I think once you listen to the song, it would be hard to write a poem without that influence. Nice job, Andrea. Good luck.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/16/2020 5:27:00 PM
I did not recall the lyrics to it so I purposefully did not go first and listen to it again. I wanted my other two verses to have the exact same meter as the last verse using their lines. I hope I at least accomplished that!! thanks, Danny.
Date: 2/16/2020 3:44:00 PM
When the stars shine-- its all love! Romantic write, Andrea--apt for the theme.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter