Yosemite Valley

A glazed view, as through a glass that magnifies
Between the granite banded with blue and umber
Cruel paths of glacier, ancient swords of hunger
Deeply carved a threshold one can hardly grasp
Each turn of compass, leaves a gasp
Forever brings our talking to a halt
Green rivers whipped to white by waterfalls
How gaunt the pines climb high upon the ridge
Itself, a place exempt from time
Justifies belief of Godly kind
Keeping watch above a valley floor
Looming monoliths of ancient lore
Morning bright of shimmering brooks that flow 
Next brings winter breezing through the mind
Ours the privilege of beholding
Past and futures coming here together
Question not the overwhelming wonder
Relished eyes behold the truthful splendor
Saturates the heart and soul forever
That if one stands too long within such glory
Under white peaks and folklore stories
Varying degrees of speechlessness and thrill
With sun above,  and human form so small
Xanadu is not of fiction, it is real
Yosemite, this place, this land of royal grace
Zenith, this land of majesty, my eyes and heart embrace


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Inspired by Deborah Guzzi's contest: "Do You Know Your A B C s?"
Dedicated to My Dad....Where he spend his childhood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 7:20 AM
Carrie, did the results of the contest change? I could have sworn you were not on the list last time I looked and now I see you ARE here on the top ten!! And I am so happy about it for you! this was my favorite one(well, I should read ALL of them first I guess.) LUv ya, Andrea
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February 4, 2010 at 11:28 PM
Great use of the ABC with stunning descriptions. Your gift is on high...Raul
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February 4, 2010 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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February 2, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Terrific piece Carrie, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest >> James
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February 2, 2010 at 3:17 AM
Congrats on your success Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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February 1, 2010 at 6:24 PM
What a beautiful journey you took us on. Every line was splashing its beauty in mind and heart. The Poem is a gem. Thanks and Many Thanks for your precious comments on my poem My Dream Love on it being featured poem. Best wishes and love Ravindra ......... for Carrie Richards
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January 30, 2010 at 5:32 PM
Why Carrie Richards! How dare you expose all this talent so shamelessly in one poem!!! Now you face a risk of winning and having to fight to stay humble again!... AHhh.. but 'tis such a battle...though one must persevere! :) Awesome poem Lady Carrie. Just awesome.-Robert. :)
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January 30, 2010 at 12:55 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.
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January 30, 2010 at 12:28 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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January 29, 2010 at 11:08 PM
A stunning word picture. This is an exceptional poem, worth reading over. Keeping to the form with no hitches. great job......Margaret
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January 29, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Awesome ABC write! Carrie! Great work of the pen and beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, caroline.
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 6:19 PM
OH, my gosh, yet ANOTHER challenge. this site has to be the ultimate for contests. Is it the best one ever, do you think, carrie? It sure seems so! Well, this is an amazing job you did and I can really see you winning first place with it! Loved this line: Green rivers whipped to white by waterfalls. Just wonderful. LUv, andrea
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January 29, 2010 at 4:53 PM
You have risen to the challenge and graced us with a gem about my favorite national park, Carrie. Wonderful entry for the contest and I wish you luck! Love, Carolyn
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