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Yosemite Valley

A glazed view, as through a glass that magnifies Between the granite banded with blue and umber Cruel paths of glacier, ancient swords of hunger Deeply carved a threshold one can hardly grasp Each turn of compass, leaves a gasp Forever brings our talking to a halt Green rivers whipped to white by waterfalls How gaunt the pines climb high upon the ridge Itself, a place exempt from time Justifies belief of Godly kind Keeping watch above a valley floor Looming monoliths of ancient lore Morning bright of shimmering brooks that flow Next brings winter breezing through the mind Ours the privilege of beholding Past and futures coming here together Question not the overwhelming wonder Relished eyes behold the truthful splendor Saturates the heart and soul forever That if one stands too long within such glory Under white peaks and folklore stories Varying degrees of speechlessness and thrill With sun above, and human form so small Xanadu is not of fiction, it is real Yosemite, this place, this land of royal grace Zenith, this land of majesty, my eyes and heart embrace ________________________________________________________________________ Inspired by Deborah Guzzi's contest: "Do You Know Your A B C s?" Dedicated to My Dad....Where he spend his childhood

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Date: 2/5/2010 7:20:00 AM
Carrie, did the results of the contest change? I could have sworn you were not on the list last time I looked and now I see you ARE here on the top ten!! And I am so happy about it for you! this was my favorite one(well, I should read ALL of them first I guess.) LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 2/4/2010 11:28:00 PM
Great use of the ABC with stunning descriptions. Your gift is on high...Raul
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Date: 2/4/2010 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 12:57:00 PM
Terrific piece Carrie, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:17:00 AM
Congrats on your success Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/1/2010 6:24:00 PM
What a beautiful journey you took us on. Every line was splashing its beauty in mind and heart. The Poem is a gem. Thanks and Many Thanks for your precious comments on my poem My Dream Love on it being featured poem. Best wishes and love Ravindra ......... for Carrie Richards
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:32:00 PM
Why Carrie Richards! How dare you expose all this talent so shamelessly in one poem!!! Now you face a risk of winning and having to fight to stay humble again!... AHhh.. but 'tis such a battle...though one must persevere! :) Awesome poem Lady Carrie. Just awesome.-Robert. :)
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Date: 1/30/2010 12:55:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.
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Date: 1/30/2010 12:28:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:08:00 PM
A stunning word picture. This is an exceptional poem, worth reading over. Keeping to the form with no hitches. great job......Margaret
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:53:00 PM
Awesome ABC write! Carrie! Great work of the pen and beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, caroline.
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:19:00 PM
OH, my gosh, yet ANOTHER challenge. this site has to be the ultimate for contests. Is it the best one ever, do you think, carrie? It sure seems so! Well, this is an amazing job you did and I can really see you winning first place with it! Loved this line: Green rivers whipped to white by waterfalls. Just wonderful. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:53:00 PM
You have risen to the challenge and graced us with a gem about my favorite national park, Carrie. Wonderful entry for the contest and I wish you luck! Love, Carolyn
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