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Yield

I should do as I'm told And not question the order But I tire of this plan It's forced me to the border. Silently obey Never question the master But is that really fair? My brain works much faster. But no, forever do as willed And be content to be alive But is it really living If your heart doesn't survive? So I cast away this evil system And raise forth my blade and shield I have had enough obedience No longer shall I yield.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/29/2010 8:37:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem.
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:28:00 PM
Love the poem and I love how you went from obeying the master, but you were always complaining...until finally you just say forget this I'm doing it my way. You started choosing for yourself instead of following the instructions. Great poem. Love Destiny
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