Yeti and Bigfoot

Tibetan monks share colorful lore
Taking wide-eyed listeners from a valley floor
To peaks in the sentinel Himalayas
So how could such holy men’s tales betray us

A dark, furry creature’s outline has been seen
Startling climbers on mountains so serene
Leaving bipedal footprints on pristine snow
Stumping searchers who try to learn where they go

Yeti, the not-so-abominable snowman
Much maligned being of God’s creative plan
Never attacks, just appears and quickly flees
Allowing sighters to suspect what they please

Howling in the pain of loss from lofty peaks
Perhaps for a missing cousin Yeti seeks
One who traversed a lost land bridge from Asia
Then made his way south from the Arctic Tundra

To explore lush forests now U.S. Northwest
Where for centuries Bigfoot has done his best
To elude capture by settlers and hunters
And scoff at ever-hopeful photographers

Publicized encounters still boggle the brain
But only footprints, blurry photos remain
Of man’s intriguing, unevolved ancestors
Scientists think they’re human predecessors

Far smarter than we, they blend in with nature
Appearing now and then in the newspaper
But their imprints on Earth have been minimal
Never chopping trees or scarring a pinnacle

They’ve reason to hide from one who pollutes
One who doesn’t reason, but only shoots
Perhaps these “beasts” we should emulate
Learn from our ancestors before it’s too late



*Entry for Joyce's "The Rhyming Game" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arowolo Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:21 PM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Carolyn.Great write.Congratulations on your super win...
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:34 AM
So glad to see you were a winner in my contest. A great poem, Carolyn. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:18 AM
Your poems always have so much knowledge and research, as well as art dear Carolyn. We can learn so much reading your exceptional work. Again, a wonderful winner! Congratulations!
Taylor Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on your well written, well deserved 1st place, Carolyn. Awesome. Enjoyed. Great job, my friend. Kudos. luv and hugs, Ralph
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your top spot win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Great poem Carolyn! Congratulations! :)
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 2:42 AM
Wonderful poem... and congrats... Terry
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Carolyn congrats on your win, loved this..David
Grisetti Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 12:11 PM
A beautifully rhymed poem. What happened to the contest?
Austin Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Be he real or imagined, the Yeti is a most fascinating creature. I know how you love these mysteries, Carolyn. Enjoyed. Love, daver
Austin Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Be he real or imagined, the Yeti is a most fascinating creature. I know how you love these mysteries, Carolyn. Enjoyed. Love, daver
Squyres Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Delightful poem with greath candance and rhyme !! love it !! Best of Luck in the contest !!
Horne Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Joyce will love this one, my friend. Excellent entry for her contest
Onclaud Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 5:19 AM
your phrases lyrically tread on the subject with such agility of words and compelling imagery.. beautiful read, carol! thanks for stopping by my popeye piece.. . you are right, it's olive oyl.. and bluto... thanks for letting me spell check... winning huggs to you! :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 5:18 AM
your phrases lyrically tread on the subject with such agility of words and compelling imagery.. beautiful read, carol! thanks for stopping by my popeye piece.. . you are right, it's olive oyl.. and bluto... thanks for letting me spell check... winning huggs to you! :)
Peranteau Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 4:47 AM
A yarn that has puzzled me for so long dear poet, and always love to trans about dear Carolyn ! TY for this delight dear friend, and I will be giving you a call love soon ! Have a blessed wee....much love, james
Peranteau Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 4:47 AM
A yarn that has puzzled me for so long dear poet, and always love to trans about dear Carolyn ! TY for this delight dear friend, and I will be giving you a call love soon ! Have a blessed wee....much love, james
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Do you really believe in them, Carolyn. I just don't know. But I would like to believe they are out there!! Lost remnants of our past. Good luck in this rhyming game challenge with your interesting poem!
Burch Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 5:09 PM
Well Done Carolyn!! lol love it...big hugs, love ya bunches...deb
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May 15, 2012 at 4:37 PM
perhaps like the whale they have an inteligence. or like ; this is going to sound way way out there. but there was a time when jesus said some of you standing here will see the comming of the son of man. and after centuries they were trans formed into this. remember i said it first.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 4:37 PM
perhaps like the whale they have an inteligence. or like ; this is going to sound way way out there. but there was a time when jesus said some of you standing here will see the comming of the son of man. and after centuries they were trans formed into this. remember i said it first.
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Interesting work about the Abominal Snowman's cousin?...Yes, we need to learn to take better care of the environment..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, I am concerned about what the future could hold for Karter and Phyllis..I know the one that holds the future though..Sara
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