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contest- Write Sixteen Beautiful Lines

sponsor- Constance La France

The rich green leaves of Summer die in Autumn like a love that is no more both defenseless to the currents of change tumbling toward an unfamiliar stream flowing out of a sea where yesterdays have already passed carrying dusted memories, entwined by the twist of life where wishes are hidden with lost stars of memorialized misperceptions having come and gone like vanishing time when the shivering swathe arrived taking both the leaves and love on a hopeless journey to non-existence when emotionless worlds acquired their life-blood causing my eyes to flow with streams out of a sea of sadness

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Date: 5/18/2025 5:42:00 AM
I feel life being told within these creative lines, Fred! Congrats!
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 5/13/2025 6:15:00 AM
- A nostalgic and beautiful poem, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/11/2025 4:50:00 PM
so cliche but relevant that it's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. your soulful, lovely offering gave me good goosebumps, frederick!
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Date: 5/10/2025 10:50:00 AM
How sorrowfully but beautifully you've written of lost love in your lines, Frederic. When it becomes as hidden as lost stars, there's nothing left except melancholy memories... and when they come unbidden, tears flow again.
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