Yesterday's Feelings

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Candied kisses are oft bittersweet when love's flavor fades, yet lingers on. Leaving a hint of passion's heat, candied kisses are oft bittersweet. Yesterday's feelings feel incomplete, like the forgotten words of a song. Candied kisses are oft bittersweet when love's flavor fades, yet lingers on. Like the forgotten words of a song, loneliness haunts your frustrated heart. You try to recall where love went wrong, like the forgotten words of a song. And those memories keep hanging on, threatening to tear your world apart. Like the forgotten words of a song, loneliness haunts your frustrated heart. Threatening to tear your world apart, memories of love bring you to tears. And feelings of anxiety start threatening to tear your world apart. Tomorrow is assigned a bit part within today's theater of fears. Threatening to tear your world apart, memories of love bring you to tears.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/4/2018 11:25:00 PM

This form amplifies the moodiness of the poem. Lovely, Emile. Congrats on a well deserved high placement.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2018 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Judith S

Date: 4/2/2018 6:56:00 PM

So well written Emile! This is an interesting form that I was not familiar with. I loved the first line and it just got better from there! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ~Judy

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2018 8:33:00 PM

Thank you Judith, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.