Yesterday in a Moment

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Soon dawn at plum morn though pearly moon still keeps watch, for the golden end. Afternoon's recalled in dreams adorned in wild color schemes. Memory Lane sleeps as orange noon is coming, after dusk scarlet. Lemon-lime hours revisit and bluebird returns vivid. Pink skies are coming a jade past is repeating, since tomorrow's gone. Time's fallen asleep, at last skewing the future and past.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/27/2025 1:54:00 PM

Evelyn, reading this delight is like have a sweet cake with multi-colored sprinkles at every time of the day or night! Every color of the rainbow pops along with wonderful lines like "time's fallen asleep, at last," "memory lane sleeps," and "skewing the future past." Sweet blessings to you, my friend.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/25/2025 1:09:00 AM

This is gorgeous. Simply gorgeous. CayCay

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/25/2025 5:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, CayCay.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2025 10:19:00 AM

- You always use colors in your beautiful poems, Evelyn... love it :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/24/2025 9:49:00 PM

Oh, that is so nice to know, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much. :) hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2025 1:55:00 AM

Three beautiful tankas and written with flair if a great poet. Love your colours, but then all your poems have colours in them.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/22/2025 4:02:00 AM

I am honored by your lovely remarks. Thank you. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 5/21/2025 3:16:00 AM

How beautiful is this dear evelyn, i love your use of colors and adjectives and the way your words flow so well here and the way youv painted imagery as always! Theres also a soulful depth to your lines that hits strong! Such an exquisitely woven poem! Pleasure reading you today! A fave this is! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/21/2025 1:53:00 PM

Deepest thanks, dear Ink, for your, as ever, inspiring remarks. I am so honored by them and by your fave. Thank you for the pleasure. :)