Yesterday

Yesterday I spoke
To the memory of you
As I was walking
Clouds moved in and covered
The last rays of the August sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Reynolds Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 7:22 PM
Wow, this was visually brilliant and emotionally wrenching - that speaks voluemes of the poet, well done tanka, love Kristin
Winter Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 9:26 AM
Aw, this is so sad. The sun will come out again. Beautiful and touching poem. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 7:48 AM
Touching and sad. What a beautiful, poignant poem. So apt in it's description of loss. Carrie
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