Yes You Are My One

yes you are my one
joyful trusted heart keeper
always lifting me

Written 2-24-2019
Contest: I Love You 2 - Haiku
Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Sweet, Caren. Congrats on your win.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 1:38 AM
Thank you Line.
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 5:54 PM
this one has a wonderful message. Congrats, caren
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 11:01 PM
Thank you Andrea. My husband prints all of these in a smug way, and pops them all over the house.
Marc Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Beautiful Caren ~ congratulations on your win!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thank you for the visit. I appreciate it.
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:53 AM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Sara. I appreciate it.
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Beautiful, Caren. Congratulations on your win. Charlie :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Thank you. My husband will be all big-headed now.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:20 AM
- Congratulations Caren, on your 1st place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Beautifully composed Caren! : ) xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Connie. It is easy when you have the same man for hundreds of years and who knows how many lifetimes?
Romios Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:29 PM
How absolutely lovey, Caren. Best wishes in the contest. Panagiota
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Panagiota.
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Very romantic Caren, Good luck. Tom.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Tom.
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 2:01 PM
ohh, this truly uplifts; so fascinating, caren... huggs
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Nette.
Roper Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Great Senryu, Caren, good luck in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you Eve, my friend.
Kiser Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Lovely sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you M.L. I know this will be a tough one.
Breidenthal Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 12:02 AM
This is a touching and amazing haiku. Thanks for sharing on here :) and thank you for your lovely comment on my poem. -JWE
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 6:11 AM
You are most welcome my friend; I am glad you like this.
DiMino Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 10:26 PM
So well said! And if you have that kind of one...you have everything.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 6:11 AM
I have had him around since I was 15 and he was 16, and we are 66 and 67 now, with 10 grandchildren, so yes, I do think we have it all.
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