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Yellow Tranquility

In the pale mist of dawn, a rower glides quietly
across a creamy, yellow lake in a golden glow.
An ethereal fog settles dreamily over the waters
as muted paddles create rippled works of art.




Written on 3/3/2016

Copyright © Laura Leiser | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2016 12:44:00 PM very lovely use imagery, Laura. Congrats in the contest. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2016 9:38:00 AM Thank you, Andrea :)

Sathya Babu Date: 3/6/2016 6:47:00 AM Laura Many congratulations on your WIN.......:-) Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2016 9:36:00 AM Thank you, Sathya :)

Hansteven Selfa Date: 3/6/2016 12:05:00 AM Congratulations Laura on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2016 9:38:00 AM Thank you, Hansteven:)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/5/2016 12:47:00 AM Beautiful imagery in your winning entry Laura. Congratulations on your fabulous win! #7 Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2016 9:37:00 AM Thank you, Connie, and for the rating, too :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/4/2016 7:23:00 PM Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Laura !Hugs dear friend Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2016 9:36:00 AM Thank you, Eve :)

Daniel Turner Date: 3/4/2016 5:25:00 PM Very beautiful picture you paint, Laura. No photo needed. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Peace young lady:) Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 6:03:00 PM Thanks so much, Daniel! You are sweet :)

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/4/2016 4:17:00 PM Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 5:01:00 PM Thank you, Laura :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 2:29:00 PM I was pretty sure I would be sending my congratulations your way. Well done Laura Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 4:59:00 PM Thank you so very much, Charlie :) And congrats to you, too :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/4/2016 5:14:00 AM absolutely beautiful imagery Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 5:02:00 PM Thank you, Jan! I loved your poem, too :)

Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 12:49:00 AM Laura, B E A U T I F U L such a dreamy yellow poem, wonderfully penned, I am loving this 7~ Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 5:01:00 PM Thank you, Mystic Rose :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/3/2016 9:26:00 PM Well done Laura. Best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 12:12:00 AM Thank you for your kind words, Charlie. I'm glad you liked it :) Laura Leiser Date: 3/3/2016 10:38:00 PM Thank you for your kind words, Charlie. I'm glad you liked it :)