Laura Leiser Poet Free verse

Yellow Tranquility

In the pale mist of dawn, a rower glides quietly
across a creamy, yellow lake in a golden glow.
An ethereal fog settles dreamily over the waters
as muted paddles create rippled works of art.




Written on 3/3/2016

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Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 12:44 PM very lovely use imagery, Laura. Congrats in the contest. Laura Leiser March 7, 2016 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Andrea :)

Sathya Babu March 6, 2016 at 6:47 AM Laura Many congratulations on your WIN.......:-) Laura Leiser March 7, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thank you, Sathya :)

Hansteven Selfa March 6, 2016 at 12:05 AM Congratulations Laura on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Laura Leiser March 7, 2016 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Hansteven:)

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2016 at 12:47 AM Beautiful imagery in your winning entry Laura. Congratulations on your fabulous win! #7 Laura Leiser March 7, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Connie, and for the rating, too :)

Eve Roper March 4, 2016 at 7:23 PM Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Laura !Hugs dear friend Laura Leiser March 7, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thank you, Eve :)

Daniel Turner March 4, 2016 at 5:25 PM Very beautiful picture you paint, Laura. No photo needed. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Peace young lady:) Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 6:03 PM Thanks so much, Daniel! You are sweet :)

Beautiful Scars March 4, 2016 at 4:17 PM Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 5:01 PM Thank you, Laura :)

Charlie Smith March 4, 2016 at 2:29 PM I was pretty sure I would be sending my congratulations your way. Well done Laura Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 4:59 PM Thank you so very much, Charlie :) And congrats to you, too :)

Jan Allison March 4, 2016 at 5:14 AM absolutely beautiful imagery Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 5:02 PM Thank you, Jan! I loved your poem, too :)

Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 12:49 AM Laura, B E A U T I F U L such a dreamy yellow poem, wonderfully penned, I am loving this 7~ Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 5:01 PM Thank you, Mystic Rose :)

Charlie Smith March 3, 2016 at 9:26 PM Well done Laura. Best wishes in the contest... Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 12:12 AM Thank you for your kind words, Charlie. I'm glad you liked it :) Laura Leiser March 3, 2016 at 10:38 PM Thank you for your kind words, Charlie. I'm glad you liked it :)