Yellow Shoes In the Darkness

Walking through the land of shadows, wearing my yellow shoes
With each and every step, I created color and lovely hues

The shadows started retreating as colour permeated the ground
Out of the shadowy darkness I heard a most horrible sound

"You sir do not belong here so I command you to go away
You are in the land of shadows, you must listen to what I say!"

I kept on moving forward not sure what I would see
Where was the voice coming from? I looked behind a tree

Light and color expanded, to the dark sky it did rise
The entity that so scared me was revealed before my eyes

As my shoes banished the darkness, the entity was reduced to tears
Without the aid of shadows he could't tap into my fears

As I reached down to touch him I told him he was safe
He looked up with such confusion as I gazed upon his face

"Are you here to destroy me? Have you come to take me away?
There is a purpose for shadows they create hope for brighter days."

I heard what he was saying, yes shadows have a reason
In order for spring to come, we need a darker season

So I removed my yellow shoes, watched as the shadows returned
It was time to head for home with this strange lesson I had learned
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Haight Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:01 PM
A meaningful message in your poem, Richard, and I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
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September 30, 2016 at 7:41 AM
loved this Richard, very lovely :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Luloo.
May Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 5:57 AM
Very nice story Richard...Congrats on your win!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Joseph.
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September 30, 2016 at 2:45 AM
Congrats on your win, Richard. Agnes
Lamoureux Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Agnes.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Richard ,I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Hi Janice, thanks for my placement. I am thrilled you enjoyed this piece.
Walker  Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Real nice piece Richard. I like the parabola.... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Hi Verlena, thanks for the visit.
Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Its great to perceive life in such a way..Indeed we need to taste the sour moments of life to aprecciate the sweeter once...Yes only through the tunnel can we see and yearn for light..amen.Outstanding you...Love your poetry.Happy Happy Birthday dear Friend..Im so honoured to know you.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Hi Charmaine. Thanks so much for both Birghday greetings. You brought me som sunshine. Hugs Rick.
Kriticos Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:06 AM
We can't say that bad things are good things, but i also believe that in the deepest darkness light shines its brightest! Well done !
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:44 AM
The interesting thing is that equate dark with good and evil. It is neither, it is merely an absence of light. Thanks for visiting me Kyle.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 1:59 AM
I enjoyed your imaginative write with a meaning message Richard. So true! : ) 7
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Connie, this was a fun one to write.
Sergi Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Hi Richard: You created a beautiful philosophic poem with yellow shoes. Great write!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, I had fun writing this one.
Vaso Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Richard, wow, I am truly at a loss for words, this is both a poem and a philosophy course! A Fav!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 8:17 AM
You are kind Arthur. I'm pleased you like it.
Manassian Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:25 PM
I remember this one....it's brilliant, Richard. I need to remember this. My daughter leaves this Sunday, and I'm really struggling this time. Can't let her go....pray for me. Hugs
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August 30, 2016 at 8:19 AM
As parents it is one of the most difficult experiences. It is however important for us to let them fly. You are stronger then you know. Blessings to both of you. Hugs Rick.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 3:10 PM
a very fascinating take on the subject. I think you did a great and inventive poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Thanks Andrea.
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August 28, 2016 at 2:20 PM
- Richard, impressive writing with wise thoughts - Great !!! - Good luck in the contest - hugs and happy new week // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, hugs back to you.
Bear Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 9:33 AM
So true we must have light after darkness but also to appreciate light we must have darkness first. You have out done yourself with this one A great big 7 for you Love Mom
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August 28, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Thanks and a big hug back to you mom. Love Rick
Wigley Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 1:49 AM
Very clever poetry, thoughtful and deep. Love it. A 7 and a fave for me, thanks. Regards, Viv
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Thanks Viv, this was a fun one to conceive.
Hardison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Kept my attention. Captivating couplet.. Strong ending. Peace, Love and Joy.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Peace love and joy to you as well, an unbeatable combination. Thanks for visiting.
Turner Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Richard, your perceptions of life are very unique and the way you express them is just remarkable. I definitely liked the feel of this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:38 AM
You are kind my friend. Thanks for your visit.
Marie Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 2:32 PM
An excellent story piece that is brimming with insights leaving a peaceful calm. To walk with 'purpose' is to become acquainted with oneself.:-) Thank you for the lovely reminder :-) blessings, lynn
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Thanks for the blessing and insightful comment Lynn.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 2:11 PM
My imagination was really working I felt that I was in another place and time. I enjoyed your poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Thanks so much Darlene.
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:43 AM
A wonderful message Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Thanks Tim.
Nance Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 10:13 AM
What a journey! insightful walking, there is much to learn. hugs x
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thanks for being the first to comment. Hugs Rick.
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