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Yellow Rose

yellow rose on bier full-bodied treatment grand life disappears ripe thorn’s, bereavement dried flower repose buried in suitcase emerge briar rose soul in boundless space 3/22/2022

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Date: 3/23/2022 5:49:00 AM
Your ending line invokes memories of rose--something to remember after death.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 3/23/2022 3:48:00 AM
Not the life we knew in them, when less pale and youthful -- but, as you say, we are assured of the resurrection -- I believe this with all my heart. Excellent imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 9:40:00 AM
Yes! Thank you, Joe!
Date: 3/23/2022 3:41:00 AM
Great poem on a yellow rose. Most write on red roses, but the yellow ones are just as beautiful. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 9:42:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Like a sunflower, a yellow rose is sunny and bright.
Date: 3/22/2022 7:28:00 PM
Death and subsequent life are beautifully depicted in this touching poem. It is in my faves. Best wishes
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2022 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate it, Evelyn!
Date: 3/22/2022 3:51:00 PM
Hello Kim, this is lovely about the yellow rose. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/23/2022 8:32:00 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2022 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene!
Date: 3/22/2022 3:44:00 PM
I really loved reading your poetry, Kim. I'm not familiar with the JUJU form, so I'll need to put in a bit more practice time.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2022 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, Sotto! I appreciate your comments.

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