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Yellow Olden Leaf

yellow olden leaf levitates when time's finished falls there where from came

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2015 11:38:00 AM

and a good morning to you. I'm reading all my replies this morning.. PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:29:00 AM

Good morning BL, you are welcome... Have a sweet day

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/18/2015 11:33:00 AM

Good morning to you too. Thanks..... have a lovely sweet Day, my best friend. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2015 11:29:00 PM

Well said my friend. I like the float before the land. a perfect 7 haiku. I have to say one of your best this year. I like the levitate and fall, of the olden leaf.... xox..Linda

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/18/2015 11:28:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your 7 my lovely friend and for your appreciation and credit and stopping by..... Loved always,bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2015 11:33:00 AM

Dear BL, This is not only filled with a vivid image, but also points out a truth. The tree is nourished by the ground and, when a leaf is dying, it returns to the ground. This could be a metaphor on human life as well. "From dust we came and to dust we shall return." Love, Carolyn

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/17/2015 1:14:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your nice comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl