Yellow Green Star

One yellow green star Above horizon In southeastern sky As sun cracks The dawn
Gogyohka form
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Davis Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Sara This is such a beautifully described picture of wonder and serenity. Thank you for the great comment on my Zombie poem.
Devnath  Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 8:49 PM
Nice poem of sweet imagination worded wonderfully. Loved always, bl
A   Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Sara, this is the image of all images today... the sun cracking down on dawn,,, love the horizon,,.. enjoyed your tanka* Goodnight! Always~ PD
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Sara, Sara, this is simply lovely!
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 2:33 PM
It is your "lucky star" Sara! - Gorgeous. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kamal Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Really loved it Sara, I visualized this tanka and enjoyed what I saw. Love, Omneya
Carrillo Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Sara; This is a very nice Tanka that you have written. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Wow! I never heard of this form; sounds wonderful! The rhythm is so powerful!Also thank you for stopping by! I am from Madagascar, in the Indian Ocean, near Mauritius and La Réunion. Yes, we always have long names: our parents' projects and desires...:) Just call me Hanitra (=scent, perfume). Love!
Sivey Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 11:43 AM
This is a wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! Incredibly spectacular piece Sara, wonderfully done, Great Work!!
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