yellow canary

yellow canary warbles to the lure of love ~ youthful dreams return

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/12/2023 7:43:00 PM

This has piqued my curiosity. I wonder if the canary's youthful dreams return, or mine do. (I'm betting on mine). Nicely done. ~ Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/13/2023 1:37:00 PM

Maybe we should ask the canary, eh? Thanks gw! laf :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/12/2023 6:03:00 PM

A lovely Haiku Linda. I had forgotten how my mother loved her canaries until I read these words. 'Youthful dreams return', indeed. Thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/13/2023 1:37:00 PM

You're welcome and thank YOU Jerry! :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/12/2023 9:39:00 AM

What a beautiful Haiku dear Linda. Such delight in just a few words. Exceptional. Loved it! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/12/2023 9:48:00 AM

Hi Christina. Thank you for stopping by again. Always a pleasure. :)

Lin Lane

Date: 9/12/2023 8:51:00 AM

And even caged, this bird sings. A very wistful poem of hope, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/12/2023 9:47:00 AM

Many thanks Lin. I'm always pleased by your visits and comments. :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/12/2023 8:33:00 AM

You are so great at Haikus Laf. This one does not disappoint. It is charming and spectacular. "Youthful dreams return". I just love it, Well done.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/12/2023 9:46:00 AM

Your comments are always positive Svvie. Thank you! :)